The Outcast: Koi-Like Luck, Tiger-Crane Double Form from the Start!
异人：锦鲤体质，开局虎鹤双形！
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.4M Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
1.1kChapters
7.6MReads
36kFlowers
9.8Score
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A few questions, first of all, an introduction to cultivating advanced superpowers??? One person has super powers, but those are considered innate and acquired through practicing Qi. If one person does not practice Qi, it is basically just a show. Then it is said that the protagonist is a small family. . . How can a small family have so much property to fight for? Even if the protagonist doesn't practice Qi, some people are afraid that the protagonist will steal the head of the family. There aren't only three people in this family, right? And the protagonist picked it up outside? Otherwise, the Yiren family would not look at the talent in Qi training and would just send them away for fear of taking the position of the head of the family. This setting would be really explosive. Then there is the soul penetration. . It's hard to comment. I personally like harem stories, but harem stories are somewhat taboo about soul-piercing.
Chapter 5 and Chapter 6 are not fluent at all. I must have copied the wrong chapter, and there are also magic weapons from the lineage of Ju Ling Qian General. Didn't Ju Ling Qian General appear in recent times? It's just your family, although the Wang family stole most of the techniques. Moreover, Feng Xingtong said that he would buy it for 30,000 yuan, and the protagonist actually said, "Will you sell it for 20,000 yuan?" This is totally wrong.
The plot is confusing, and none of the character's signature skills are fully understood. When did the Feng family serve Liu Xian?
??? Brother, have you ever seen Under One Person??? You want to poison me to death, right? Ju Ling sent generals???? **
So this is called a koi physique that can produce ice type even if you break a stone? Can you break the defense with just two kicks? Shouldn't it be a squib?
The title is completely inconsistent with the content. Have you ever seen Under One Person, why Feng Xingzhu's spirit is Liu Xian, not an old man with medical skills?
The protagonist is trash. If the protagonist's life is to be taken, the protagonist's wife will be separated from the family property. Is it in the past?
What the hell, didn't it say it was a time traveler? Later on, it's like I don't know the plot, so I'm just being stupid.
I was hooked when I saw the beginning. Ju Ling Qian Jiang is the name of someone's martial arts. They are witches, so they use that to call themselves Ling.
Well, it basically has nothing to do with the main plot of one person. In addition, it feels like the protagonist is trying to be public when speaking, and it's funny to see that the author's IP address is correct.