Pokemon Girls: The Aura Staff Hero Forces a Contract from the Start

I read your latest, and I didn't want to read it for a moment. I came to FeiluTM to read Shuangwen. After seeing what you wrote, I might as well go elsewhere to read it.

What are you dragging? What's the difference between you and those who join evil organizations and end up doing a lot of trivial things and being unable to conquer the elves? Also, I've long been tired of seeing urban pretentiousness and slaps in the face. If your subject matter is so good, don't write about little bastards who are not as talented as the protagonist and come to trouble the protagonist. You should think that raising an elf wife is the highlight. Any urban plot will lower the quality of your book. Your data speaks for itself. There is no problem with the writing and outline. The only shortcoming is that it is watery and does not get into the theme.

There is no need to write from the 8th to the 24th chapter, it's not cool enough, Tai Shui obviously can finish one chapter but insists on writing three, he obviously has a good writing outline, but he has to play a bad hand.

Very good creative subject matter and author of sand-writing and brain-twitching articles

And it's still a very old show of pretending to slap someone in the face. He's already tired of this kind of subject, so why not just run over it? Why, if I'm not good enough, do I have to get the upper hand?

It's well written. Why do so many people say it? Come on, author! Just don't do those little villains, it's a bit embarrassing to watch.

The subject matter is quite good, but when everyone knows that in Pokémon, the master is stronger than the champion and the king is stronger, you told me that the master is weaker than the king. I don't quite understand what this operation is. Do you want to show your originality?

It's really watery. It's okay to write a broken awakening starting from Chapter 7 and then reaching Chapter 30.

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If you could only choose three, which three would you choose? 1: IQ increased by 100% 2: The art of rejuvenation 3: You can become invisible, walk through walls, burrow under the ground, fly, and have a god-level mind at will. Spiritual teleportation, through the door, god-level healing, god-level telekinesis, god-level spiritual sealing Locking Technique, God-Level Gene Blocking Technique 4: You won't get sick, and your body will be strengthened comprehensively. 5: You can completely and unlimitedly reshape your body at will 6: Five supernatural powers, the language of all things 7: God-level reincarnation power, memory retention, reincarnation of your choice 8: God-level disguise, god-level hacking technology, god-level psychology, god-level Cui Mian technique 9: Chaos level world bead 10: Predict the next seven days 11: God-level danger perception, God-level eyesight 12: Immortality and eternal life 13: Infinite Devouring Evolution of God-level Magical Powers 14: Infinite clones of divine powers 15: Reply 66 and like it to get the above abilities