In an empty lot behind the Silver Orphanage, a boy of seven or eight dragged a 50-jin stone tied around his waist. Sweat drenched his body, but he gritted his teeth and kept dragging it.
Yan Yu. Though he looked eight, he was only six. His training regimen had honed his body and made him look more mature. He had begun training hard every day at the age of four.
When he was three, he started having strange nightmares every night, making it difficult to sleep. The nightmares would eventually come true one by one, and Yan Yu kept striving to avert the disaster.
This novel and its characters are entirely fictional. Any resemblance to real people or events is purely coincidental. Do not imitate.
The writing style is not bad, but the content is mediocre and has no highlights. Look at those who have been criticized for many typos and poor writing skills, but their grades are still good. As long as the three views are correct and the content is interesting, Feilu can always attract some readers. After all, it is all for fun. But are you serious about the title of your book and the introduction? Even if you click on it, you will still see the beginning of The Riddler. Do you really have no desire to read on? After all, this is a concentration camp for fast food literature. There is also a problem with paragraph allocation. Some chapters have a maximum of ** words, and some chapters have more than ** words. This needs to be balanced. After all, one chapter will be gone after turning three or four pages. If one chapter exceeds nine pages, it will affect the experience.
This introduction can only be said to be unattractive.
The author has written more than 30 pieces, but why has no one commented? Does it look good?