A Kamen Rider in the Childhood Classic Magic Bullet Chronicles

The subject matter is good and it brings back memories of my childhood, but you need to work harder on your writing!

Please sort out the symbols. It's dazzling to write like this. Also, arrange the chapters. Without symbols, it's hard to attract people. Just the rows of words will make others see it.

It's been a while since I've seen Modan's results!

This sentence doesn't look very smooth. Especially the dialogue part and the part about winning the prize in the lottery should not be connected and should be divided into sections. It looks weird when you write it like this. Please check it after typing.

I'm super! Magic Bullet War fanfic!

It scares me, few people write it, come on

Brother, since you are in this line of work, you need to write it down and check it, otherwise no one will read it.

I don't understand why what I wrote was banned, but someone else's could be published. Chapter 4 was deleted halfway through, so I can only try my best to delete it.

I didn't expect that there would be so many friends who like this Magic Bullet Chronicle as much as I do. I will try my best to restore the original work and write it down. I really like some old Japanese tokusatsu dramas, and I plan to write about Flying God Gran Saisha, Iron Armor Xiaobao, etc.

Is there any chance to write Yalang?