
Ultimate: Gangster Boy, Gambit Released from Prison
终极:黑道少年,开局从监狱释放
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- Ongoing
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- 2.0M Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Film & TV Fanfiction
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 1d ago
- Source
- Faloo
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So, where is grandma? I read Chapter 10. At the beginning, I said how filial I was, but now my grandma has been caught and she doesn't react at all? ? ? Haven't mentioned it in a chapter yet
It seems like this name, I know the author is a fool
Ghostwriter 1 could barely manage a chapter of about 2/1 licking, and repeated the licking for a few pictures. From Hunters and Wanted it's ghostwriting. 4/3 Of one chapter is licking and it's repeated every chapter.
It's over fifty chapters and it appears twice? ? It feels like Goldfinger is a tool in the author's writing. It pops up at a critical moment in the plot to pave the way for the next generation of plots.
What is the purpose of this book, to go to another earth to experience the plot and then disappear? Is a small place on earth a world? What does the protagonist think of the universe?
He is also a thunder dragon and very strong.
In war, superior forces are concentrated to defeat the smaller ones with more troops. This is common sense. Does the author understand? Every time he has extra troops, he doesn't use them, but instead uses less to fight against more. Is Li Yunlong so stupid?
When I saw the second picture, the main character looked like an imbecile like Zhi Z!
Intentional injury is a public prosecution crime, which is investigated by the public security organs and transferred to the procuratorate for prosecution. During the trial of the case, this person was staying in the detention center. Will the police still need to arrest people later? ? ? ? Do you have any brain? ? ?
Sadie has the strength of a lieutenant general, so you can brag.
I figured out that you, the author, were thinking of various ways to improve the word count. First, you unified the routine at the beginning. Jun Yangjia praised the protagonist for being cruel and powerful, and repeated it several times. Then I suggested that you don't need to repeat the routine, and you changed this habit. It has become like praising the protagonist through violent and demonic incidents that remind people of the protagonist at every turn. So I posted a comment asking you if you don't know how to write without praising the character, but you ignored it. Recently, there are a lot of paragraph spaces including "...", And there are still a lot of sentences praising the protagonist. You want to show that you are getting better and better, right?
Seeing that the fox demon is the heroine, he decisively **
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Updates are not active and there are ideological problems
It's a bit too much, but it's not enough. There are basically the same routine in more than 20 chapters. You beat the king and the sheep, and then admire the protagonist. Then there are a bunch of people who are not long-sighted and discerning.
Where did the picture come from? Can you borrow one and send me a private message?
I actually stayed up until 4 o'clock to finish reading Chapter 195, and it's so toxic that I'm still not finished.
It's really embarrassing. What did you write?
Suddenly I discovered a problem. This is a daily update chapter. I have been chasing it for so long before I realized it.
Repeated methods to make hair, hair, hair
Don't say one billion, just one hundred thousand is enough. I am a person who is easily satisfied...
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Your writing is very good, but I always feel a sense of separation. I feel that you are more of a writer of Yakuza series or hot-blooded series. I really feel good about it. Come on.
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