
People Write Diaries in Knights and Get the Dimensional Wall at the Beginning
人在骑士写日记,开局获得次元壁
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- Ongoing
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- 150k Words
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- Fanfiction
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- Film & TV Fanfiction
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 2y ago
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- Faloo
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I am a person with good looks and don't like Imperial Cavalry! Ugly! Especially the form of ancestors! So ugly!
Although I think the overall writing is good, the main character has a lot of nonsense and stupidity. Standing in front of the Zerg means that you are already in combat mode, but he appears again without changing his body. You want to show off in front of the heroine, can't you wait until it's safe? What I hate most about armor and Kamen Rider is that they transform in front of the enemy in a swaggering manner, and they don't just change when they want, but they need a lot of preludes before they can transform. If you can crush me with your body and compare it with armor, I won't say anything. But you are a weakling now, and you all rely on the blessing of armor. Do you think that the speed of the Zerg's time-upgrading, and even the Zerg itself, is not faster than that of an ordinary strong man like you? I'm really speechless. So why do some people always say that Kamen Rider, Armor Warrior, and Ultraman are all for children? This is the reason. The writing is not realistic at all.
The protagonist's strength is obviously enough to take over the world in an instant, but it takes so long, so many foreshadowings, and so much content.
Chapter 50 starts to feel like ghostwriting. I have no impression of the protagonist of the fourth story at all. The contrast with the previous plot is too big.
First, good books are updated quickly, which keeps me awake at night
Just a reminder! When I see the vice-president, I think of provoking him before! The author must have not forgotten, right?
I haven't read the update yet, so I'm going to subscribe for the first time. I hope the author can continue as always. Don't write any problems. The protagonist's current performance is so awesome. He obviously has power, but he is written like a mortal, which is a lot of price reduction. . . Can't the dimensional wall just be used like the protagonist's? But some people write about their ability to reward and write beautifully, and use it like a bucket. . . Smelly and hard. . . .
Regarding that, it must be my review of Chapter 35 of the Great Brawl; Wang Wei turns into a psychological mentor, "A Man Writes a Diary in a Knight, and Obtains a Dimension Wall at the Start".
The one about that must be Chapter 2 of my book "A person writes a diary in a knight and gets a dimensional wall at the beginning". Zerg riding on the face? Aurora curtain! Start up! Chapter review.
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