Among the Unusual Ones: A Charm-Demon Pretty Boy Joins the Chat Group

Fourteen or fifteen years old is also called Xiaoshota? He was also lifted high by the Heavenly Master. Don't you feel ashamed?

A few questions I'm looking at so far: First, there are too many female characters, and the whole story is about interactions with female characters, with chatting accounting for most of the story. Moreover, the author is not strong enough in writing. Because there are too many characters, the characters will inevitably become stereotyped, which is tiring. It is recommended that the other main plots and the interactive plots with female characters should account for half and half. Seven times a night, there is an intermission! Second, the character of the protagonist is not well controlled. The main theme of the story is about a clear and innocent little shota being flirted with by his older sister, who teaches him how to be an adult. Otherwise, you already have a succubus physique and are already attracted to the opposite sex, so why would you want to have a shota setting? Why is Momonosuke so annoying? Just because of the conflict between the grade and the character, it is too greasy and makes people feel **. Third, the abandoned baby who was adopted ten years ago is now fourteen years old. He did this math problem really well. Don't do it again. Four years old, isn't it called an abandoned baby? That's called a lost child. Those who are still in swaddling clothes are called babies! Also, I personally feel that fourteen-year-old boys are a bit old. In fact, twelve years old is just right. It has just grown and can stand up and enter the hole. As a succubus, the small steel cannon is a bit bigger and it is also like a river.

I don't hate Xiao Wu that much, generally, but the timeline feels a bit too late. Is the author writing Chinese comics made in China? Let me give you some data to support this. I remember that there was a similar novel that I planned to write as a Chinese comic.

**No**! Now when writing about Succubus Shota, the essence is pure love, with clear stupid eyes, being bullied by the big sister, don't write too greasy.

There is no author on the whole internet who writes about an old man who is a succubus. It must be very interesting.

Fourteen years old is written like four years old

By the way, does the author really know the concept of 14 years old? At 14 years old, he is almost a freshman in high school, but he ended up acting like a kid in the first or second grade of elementary school.

Is the author too old? I wonder if the female protagonists in novels and anime are now being designed. The protagonist is obviously pretending to be an ignorant child. Why do everyone talk so greasy, like people in their 50s and 60s talking dirty words to each other? It makes me want to vomit.

Why are there so many succubus-type novels recently?

The character of the protagonist changes too quickly, right? The way you write it, it feels very similar to Momonosuke, only a little more charming than Momonosuke. He also falls in love with someone and regards the other as his future wife.