Detective Conan: Stealing Yukiko and Eri Kisaki from Their Fiancés

I finally waited for you. Fortunately, I didn't have sex. First of all, if you traveled through time in advance, I hope you can change Tomoko and Mary Elena and have her beard cut off. Don't always change your career and have your beard cut off just for the sake of Eri Yukiko. It's all so early in advance, not to mention all the girls you accept. It often happens that girls related to the main characters change their career and have their beard cut off. Isn't it too much? By the way, Belmode also wants it. Remember, it seems to have something to do with Gin. This timeline is good, but it really can't be moved up any earlier. The most important thing is that what I said was twenty years in advance. At the very least, there should always be girls related to the main characters appearing everywhere, right?

Very speechless, the protagonist has forgotten his identity? Terrorists! Now that you have taken in Tomoko Suzuki, why don't you kill her fiancé? Why keep him? New Year? It's just right to frame the crime to the underworld, and then the mantis stalks the cicada and the oriole follows behind, taking away the money stored in the underworld stronghold, and acquiring some arms to replenish the weapons arsenal.

If you want to write, write it well. You have to add some random characters. You can't even handle the girls from Ke Xue World. You also have to add other characters. What's important is their identity and ability. Can they fall in love with this ruffian-like urban dragon king template you created? Apart from the abilities imposed by the system, I don't see any shining points of the protagonist. His mind is full of yellow waste, his IQ is worrying, and his work is irritable.

Your writing about Fei Yingli and Yukiko is so annoying. The character is wrong

Even if the beard is cut off, the beard is still not complete?

You should choose to cut them all, such as Akai Marie and Miyano Elena.

I hate bad memes. Sometimes it seems like you're being too dramatic. The first chapter made me personally feel uncomfortable. You have to use memes appropriately.

It's you again, every time your novels have to use these bad jokes, just insert them appropriately, don't just make it up.

Your Chapter 6 is so uncomfortable. Are you trying to become a virgin in the anime world?

I can accept the criticisms of similar character settings, or too much nonsense in the whole text, but for those who say that it is not completely cut off, you'd better watch Conan, and you'd better read the content before criticizing. The character Fangtani Vivian is all made up by me. Anyway, the cutoffs I wrote have not been touched.