The Reborn Come to My Door and Ask Me to Start the Age of Elves

The game started off pretty well. I rated the elves before I saw them. Then when I saw the elves, I looked like I knew them very well. I told others that I thought nothing would happen to me, and people in the country still believed me. I really can't do it without thinking.

What kind of shit is written in more than 70 chapters? Just a low-level domestic bird can reach an altitude of 10,000 meters, right? This is the kind of thing that can shit on the head of Rayquaza, right? How many times have you written just feeling slighted and angry by the protagonist? It is said that you use gods to express your strength, but in the end it is all your subordinates who take action. What did you express? You get a few walking beasts and use three powders, and then you get a few housebirds and take them to the sky, and they will be destroyed directly. Several generals are written like street gangsters.

In the anime, Black Rayquaza was able to challenge six of the strongest legendaries and he didn't fall short. But you wrote that Black Rayquaza and two Deoxys fought with both sides losing. Then you were subdued, can you still talk more!

Zoroark transformed into a lightning bird, and what the hell is it that he still has the fighting power of a lightning bird? Zoroark is just an illusion! The transformations of the various monsters are not enough, only fantasy can do it!

I just saw it, but 20 pieces have been sold around the world. The secret treasure that contains the power of rules that only gods can master is only worth 200 million? Do you have any misunderstandings about the rich? Even if these rich people are ignored, the country will never release such precious strategic materials.

In the beginning, there was no female protagonist in the outline of the book, so the setting was rough. At first, it was He Yuyu who had long legs after all. But as I continued to write, I felt that it was really impossible for the protagonist to not get married in her thirties. After all, there were still two people in the Shang family watching, so I made some adjustments. After researching a lot of information about this book, I really felt that Lou Xiao'e was the most tragic in it, so I chose Lou as the heroine. However, the grudge against the Lou family has been forged, and I still haven't figured out how to deal with it. Now I find that many readers have strong opinions, so this book review, as of 8 pm on February 16th, gives thumbs up to those who support Lou Xiaoe's role as the heroine, and despises those who don't support it. We will judge it based on the data at that time.

Damn it, they didn't give me a novice gift package when I traveled through time. How could I survive in that game if I was thrown into it? Waiting online, quite urgent.

Even though I knew I was using my abilities to canvass votes, the plot was too unnatural, too crude, and too stiff. If the person involved casually recalls it, he will definitely feel that the whole school has been hypnotized or drugged, which is extremely unnatural. At least you can add a declaration to ignite the scene and make the whole process more natural.

A time-traveler doesn't believe what's written on the stone tablet, so he has to discuss it

Just don't start the age of elves and kill that reborn woman.

How about comparing the secret skills of gods and demons with the secret skills of martial arts?

It's good. As the strongest person, don't get caught up in trivial matters. The writing is quite ugly. Everything else is okay.

I was hooked just after reading the first chapter. The Reborns are here. What's wrong with you pretending to know Pokémon? You can also expose it

The first chapter is about ** stuff, nuclear weapons are in the cow and there is a mythical beast called the cow. Putting aside mobility, even if Dialga is killed, what will happen to the alpaca? ?

The protagonist feels a bit immature, and some things he does feel awkward.

. I can listen to ghosts. Kill the ghost. Will lose meat. . . Can play chess. . . Will go off tangent. . . The plate will get stuck. .

Tiga is not blue. The settings of Stun Evolution 3 are okay, but then it becomes a demonic modified version with unlimited energy, and if you can't dodge 0 active defense skills, you will get an invincible shield. Lucia is just a loser and has a redundant mission? The character design was okay at first, but then the character design was directly interpreted as it was just a game before, and then I suddenly realized that I want to be a good person, so I took action against Lucia? Lucia: "I'm really sorry that I'm weak."

Will this book be popular? What a wonderful thing to write

@Author, since you wrote about the Elf Competition, you should also know how destructive the evolved Elf is. It's best to think about the venue and create the energy protective field like in the animation. Otherwise, you won't be afraid of the audience being injured in high-level Elf Competition.

I hope the protagonist will not conquer elves like Arceus or Mew, otherwise it will be as if the author is completely invincible and has no ability to fight against them in the world.

When Rayquaza Mega Evolution does not require Mega Evolution, all you need to do is learn to add the finishing touches.

I don't understand why you insisted on writing about leeches, and yet you fell in love with it. This is just a bad book, I won't read it

It's not okay for you to remain under the Queen Mother.

This novel is not very well written and updated slowly.

It's really hard to conquer the elves*

I can see that my trigeminal nerve hurts, and my balls also hurt.

The effects of many skills in it are wrong, as is the attribute restraint. The ice element is four times more powerful than the dragon element. But overall it's okay

The writing was acceptable at first, but after about 300 words, the word count started to get a little low. Keep mentioning things that you have mentioned before

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Why did I doze off while watching it?