American Comics: Living Off Women While Playing Hardball, Starting with the Mutant Academy

If you could only choose three, which three would you choose? 1: Heaven-defying wisdom and understanding 2: God-level speaking skills 3: God-level invisibility, God-level teleportation, God-level door-traveling, God-level healing, God-level telekinesis, God-level sealing 4: Unlock the perfect limiter and infinitely enhance your energy and spirit. 5: God-level weapon refining and alchemy formation 6: God-level painting, God-level purification, God-level summoning 7: God-level reincarnation magical power guarantees memory and chooses reincarnation 8: God-level transformation, God-level hacking, God-level hypnosis, God-level creation, God-level extraction and manifestation 9: God-level Chaos Bead 10: God-level prophecy, God-level cooking, God-level singing, God-level optimization 11: God-level perception, god-level heart, eye-level adaptation 12: Eternal immortality 13: God-level infinite devouring evolution 14: God-level unlimited clones, God-level luck, God-level driving, God-level singing 15: God-level unlimited copy and superimposed increase 16: God-level detection technique God-level rebound 17: God-level fusion of god-level charm 18: Reply 66 and like to get the above abilities

The front is okay, but the back is not so good. Team Jing won't accept it. I really appreciate Team Shock. **.

Wouldn't it be nice if all the Kryptonians were female? Strengthening is not faster this way

The author's imagination is really powerful, and his ability cannot be used forever.

The protagonist has no strength at all.

Why don't we follow the x-royal formula when it comes to mutants? Mutants can build their own country. Things like the black robe are too abstract. The black robe itself is a caricature and exaggerates a lot of things.

The writing is good, except that the update is a bit slow, and there are so many words that you are still unwilling to change the ability to permanent. Although it was explained two days ago, you can't handle the skipping ones and the new ones. Although this setting is very cool, the word "temporary" can probably attract more than a third of the readers. After all, everyone is not a fool to jump in when they see a trap.

I really strongly recommend that you don't do anything where the heroine gets more and more and the protagonist will be thought-controlled and do whatever they say. It's enough to like and get closer to each other more and more. Thought change is so poisonous that even monthly packages are rarely used or this setting. Because if you do this, let alone the emotional drama. No matter how I write it, I can't feel it. It's all plastic dolls.

If you really don't know how to describe your strength, why don't you write it? There are so many high-level abilities written like a FW.

To mention a few points, I have read more than forty chapters. 1. Superman has a super brain. Although he doesn't use it normally, he can quickly learn all human knowledge with his super brain. 2. It's best to make your copying ability permanent as soon as possible, otherwise it will look too uncomfortable. 3. There is a code of life that can directly create a bunch of female Kryptonians. In Feilu, you can also directly transform the environment and build a country. Anyway, Kryptonians can have their thoughts engraved with steel seals, and the awakened brains of Kryptonians are much better than most scientists. 4. Don't write some inconsistent plots. Reading other comments says that the protagonist is not afraid of kryptonite in the front but is afraid of kryptonite in the back. This is very problematic. 5. The calculation of the combat power of the American comic universe is basically one level lower than the debate circle here. The single universe level of the American comic is basically similar to the structure of the universe, especially in the film and television categories. The screenwriters of comics simply let themselves go. Considering that the author should focus on film and television, you can refer to it when describing.