
Comprehensive Comic: a Big Adventure That Begins with September's Heart-Stealing
综漫:从九月偷心开始的大冒险
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- Ongoing
- Length
- 38k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Faloo
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Is this the author's first time scrapping aluminum? It is recommended that you should not have multiple identities, and even if you are writing, you should not have any contact or affection. Otherwise, I feel insecure. Personally, I don't like or never watch male protagonists with multiple identities. One identity is enough, and there is no need to hide it. Otherwise, it would be too evil if one person has close contact with this identity and the other person likes another person.
The author keeps writing, just ignore the comments in the comment area and write directly. Anyway, it can be seen in the background. Everyone is just expressing their opinions and questions. As long as they are written down, it won't be a big problem.
What does the author say? Why did the male protagonist say at the beginning that he didn't know if there would be a Cinderella scene? Isn't that the plot of Ryusei's love for September? No collection in September? And the male protagonist can't do anything to change the plot now? Can only watch? I thought that the male protagonist would not let Cinderella come out when he watched September doing things. It was impossible to avoid lightning. What does the author say about Xuan Yue's justice? Isn't Xuan Yue so dark in the early stage that she can't be cleared up later? I think others are saying that Xuan Shisan is not good. In October, we can still say that some characters created by the ** group are split. The other two are plot issues, right?
1. The protagonist has no brain analysis and almost relies on his friends. 2. Nangong Yue achieved the perfect crime. This is the first time I have seen it after reading a detective story. This means that the protagonist has lost half a step. 3. The information is all provided by the system, and the protagonist has no contribution. All the cases are solved naturally, and there is no sense of decryption at all. 4. It is redundant to bring in those detectives, because it will dilute the role of the protagonist, and it also means that the protagonist is not omnipotent. For example, there are psychological profiling, forensic science, criminal investigation, and mind reading. It feels like the protagonist does not have any of these abilities and relies on sharp intuition to solve the case. Specifically, you can look at The King of Crime Solvers and The Young Master, which can be said to be Feilu's two best detective works.
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I read seven or eight books about time travel in Feilu, and most of them were eunuchs after one or two hundred chapters.
Just because of October? I thought it was just a matter of time and again, but to be honest, I still have a good impression of October. However, your identity must be exposed, don't hide it and let others know who you are, and don't do that kind of thing where you like the male protagonist with another identity and then your family arranges for the male protagonist with another identity to be known and matched by others. It's very evil.
Oh, the author really doesn't want to give up. Let's see when you don't give up this time.