Entertainment: Being Overheard, the Sisters Became Corrupted

Su Xiaoyan has accepted it, or did Chu Zihang give birth through IVF? It's a bit poisonous. It's better to adopt or adopt a stepson or something.

Usually, the impression I give people when they communicate for the first time is that they are very annoying. When they first meet, they are always venomous.

Didn't I tell you that the state will provide you with everything, and if you want money, I'll give it to you as much as you like. The troops stormed out in minutes.

Thanos is the overlord of the universe, why don't you come to a planet?

What kind of book can you write if you are so **? General, are you so weak? Don't treat readers as if they are mentally retarded.

According to the timeline of the novel, there is also the Qin State, and before Qin Shihuang died, did Xu Fu live for thousands of years?

This cover looks a bit familiar, I think we can take a step to chat

It's a eunuch protagonist again. Is it difficult to play a normal protagonist? Obviously everyone wants to see this, author!

Let me ask, is the author a girl? I feel like the protagonist is a bit of a sissy?

How can I read this book?

Repeated explanations of a question can affect your desire to read further.

As long as it's a female protagonist, just push it. If you don't like it and can't take her away, then don't mess with her, okay?

The book is clearly organized and the content logic is acceptable, but there are problems with the plot arrangement. One yin and one yang are the Tao. In online articles, the improvement of the protagonist's strength generally provides the basis for living a good life, and the contradictions encountered in a good life require improvement in strength to resolve. This cycle continues. What readers of online articles want to see is this process. How to express this theme is a matter for different authors. The author later avoids the characters created earlier and rushes to open up new maps and write upgrades. It is really picking up sesame seeds and losing watermelons. The most important characters in the novel are like white steamed buns that have just a little sweetness and are thrown away. There is a lot of content to write here, such as doting on girls, pretending to be a slap in the face, training subordinates, etc. These will not fall into clichés and people will be happy to read them. The important thing is to grasp the unfolding and outbreak of conflicts, and the final ending. How to cut in and detonate reasonably, and how to pretend b in a popular way

Write realistically and don't be too outrageous.

Squeeze it and you will have diarrhea. No one can hydrate you in Chapter 4. Why don't you squeeze me and give me a "husband hug"? This is how you write a book, right? You talked endlessly about a few nose characters, and I praised you for your worldliness and sophistication in that chapter. Oh! Just put on eye drops when you get there, right? Then look at Nirvana

The reviews are not wrong, the protagonist is too vulgar and perverted. And like Reba, Bailu burst into tears after knocking on her face? Do you want to write it in such a pretentious way? Just like a child, right? Author, you have published a novel after all. Don't tell me that you can't avoid these unnecessary poisonous points. Did you write it like this on purpose or specifically? Can you be normal?

I watched about 40 pieces, the whole variety show, it was really hard to watch, no, next, go, slip, go

BY baby's seven skills and eight skills? Do you think NetEase is a fool?

The plot is not right at all. The role reversal is too serious. The words that should have been spoken by Di Renjie are now the protagonists. There is also a feeling of skipping the scene.

Just be normal. It feels a little abnormal. It looks a little embarrassing(??｀)

Zhao Lusi, please be less tea girl.

Just kiss on the lips, what the hell are you always chewing on? It doesn't matter if it's once or twice, it's really cool to keep writing like this

After taking it, which girl has diarrhea and cries like a ****? And it's not easy to be a star, isn't it? Why are you like a ** who keeps crying and beats anyone who comes? He's not a 3.4-Year-old kid anymore! After taking it, I was stunned!

The protagonist's sense of existence is too low, and he has been poisoned.

What kind of terminally ill chuunibyou wrote this? Also named after God, **

I have never read a novel with so many typos

Bang Gang is immortal in any novel.

Commentary on Chapter 14: The Lion Opens His Big Opening, "After the Breakup, I Became a Mecha Master" by Mechanical Pioneer.

Your article is like flowing clouds and flowing water, and it is written in one go. After reading it, I was enlightened and enlightened.

I feel like the writing is a bit awkward.