
Traveling Through the Worlds with a Black Hole
带着黑洞去诸天
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 2.0M Words
- Genre
- Urban Romance
- Subgenre
- Urban Life
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
790Chapters
10.9MReads
31.2kFlowers
10.0Score
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Reader comments 27
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The long paragraphs of text are painful to the eyes. Is the author allergic to punctuation?
Accept a goddess? I originally thought it was a stud story, but now it's a powerful and wealthy woman, but she's still an unrelated person, she's almost 40, who are you fooling?
Don't be too weak? I can't fight the protagonist once he gets a big one, but now the protagonist says he doesn't want to fight, and he's been pinched every time, but the protagonist doesn't feel any pain anyway, and I don't know why.'
These densely packed characters make me dizzy, do you understand the author?
What were you thinking about with a daily salary of 20 in the 1950s?
To be honest, the writing is generally readable and the punctuation marks are secondary. The most poisonous point is that every time you time travel so early, the beautiful heroine and supporting actress are not born. Now that the protagonist has a cave, can he bring a woman with him? After all, he has the life-extending skills.
Too exaggerated... It's even worse than Xiaobai's writing… Even Jianguo came out... Do you think it's ancient times? Gangs fight, nearly 20,000 people go shopping... Are you sure that in small Hong Kong, with so many people shopping, no one pays attention or curbs? Ten or twenty thousand people gathered to fight and fight. Is the army blind? No matter how crooked or corrupt the police are, they can't shoulder this responsibility, right? The governor of Hong Kong must be replaced immediately... This is such nonsense. It can only be used as a story to pass the time. There is no sensory pleasure at all. It just depends on the author's care...
What's going on behind the scenes is so shitty. One person is challenging Britain and the United States alone.
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Can the dialogue be punctuated? Author.