
Fighting World: Succubus Shota, Join the Chat Group
斗气世界:魅魔正太,加入聊天群
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I probably started to make up Dugu Qiubai's Tomb. The Fire Qilin in Fengyun is a demon saint. Does anyone know if there is another world or other world in the title of the novel?
The heroine is too vain. Although the protagonist is a succubus, falling in love with her upon meeting her seems too intellectual, and there is no sense of accomplishment in watching it without a strategy. In this way, your character will have no unique appeal, and readers will lose it as they watch it. The plot of the Little Medical Fairy is somewhat disrespectful of the original work. She is a doctor in a town, and all the male mercenaries in the town regard her as a goddess. They like to go to her for medical treatment. Do you think she has never touched a man? . . Of course, this is just a minor problem and it doesn't matter. The main reason is that your plot has no ups and downs and is not exciting. The only exciting thing is driving. However, your heroine has not written a distinctive feature. Please change it quickly, otherwise you will definitely not be satisfied with the subscription.
It's nice to see, I'm quite happy, there's no pressure to level up, and it's decisive in killing supporting characters and passers-by! As for the part about extinguishing the fire, I feel that the way you wrote it is no different from the original plot. When I watched the horse fight back then, I thought this episode was funny. In the fantasy world, people will destroy you in a matter of minutes. What qualifications do you have to pretend like this? Your protagonist should know the plot. Shouldn't we lead someone to kill them and then take away the ring and token?
When will jb Danzo die?
I want the parting gift, I want the spiral of happiness. Why not give the protagonist skills? Why only give him cultivation? The Yin Qi should be dark blue, right? If there is a Rasengan, why not just add some to make it a Rasengan?
It's useless to explain too much. I don't know how the elder brother downstairs saw that I was giving away my daughter. I wanted to speak for Nalan Yanran in Chapter 9. It was obvious that I wanted to give Xiao Yan a hard time and yet I wanted to please him? Did I please him? Is there a flattering sentence? Giving away a daughter? Did I give one away? Xun'er has been changed by me. He's not the eldest brother, so he can't talk nonsense. Then there is Xiao Zhan who is tough on Ge Ye, so what can I say? Ask Fei Lu, what can I say? He was tough in the original work, but in my case he is a soft-footed shrimp?
Update soon, everyone has their own preferences for radishes and vegetables, I really like to see these
Regarding the height issue, I see that there are quite a lot of responses. I will ask the editor for permission to change it tomorrow. In fact, when I first wrote about this height, I looked it up. The answer given by the search was that people living a good life in childhood have a national conclusion that 13 to 156 are young girls, and the height is 1.6 To 1.65 Meters, so I adopted it. However, since so many people have said it, I will ask the editor for permission to change it tomorrow. Thank you for your support.
Commentary on chapter 017: Camilla in "Chat Group: Dark Cerro, Sister Came Has Fallen" written by Qiyue Yushi.