Multiverse: Genetic Fusion, Starting with Grimm
综美：基因融合，从格林开始
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 264k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
118Chapters
2.3MReads
8.5kFlowers
9.9Score
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The world of fusion is a hodgepodge, and everyone can find something unpleasant in it. Why do so many people like to write about it? Isn't it good to come up with each one one by one, insisting that the author set the most awesome setting, and then regardless of the readers' understanding, whether they like to read it or not?
The plot is okay, but the writing style needs to be improved. The writing is a bit messy. Some places are not connected well. It looks messy, as if it has been deleted. It jumps from here to there at once, and there is no transition in the middle. Come on, I quite like this Goldfinger.
The author wants you to rewrite it and not integrate the Marvel world.
The content is very messy, many places are not expressed clearly, and there are many mistakes in punctuation and so on. One sentence is not coherent, and it really needs to be improved.
Let's not talk about sentences and typos, let's just add Marvel, DC and mutants. This is too exaggerated. Anyway, I haven't seen anyone finish the book, so they are all half-dead.
Author, take a look at what you wrote. There is no main line.
It's a pity that it's a good book but it incorporates Marvel. Why do I feel like the main character is a nanny and some kind of virgin? The main character is not going to join S. H. I. E. L. D.
The subject matter is good, but the writing is not, the characters have no charm, and the plot is fragmented and scattered.
A lot of bad sentences! Typos! Didn't the author himself read it before publishing it? Completely**!!!!!!!!!!!
I just read it and there are a lot of bad sentences! I can't read it smoothly. Didn't the author read it himself?