Anime Crossover Chat: Getting Up Close and Personal with Kasumigaoka

The author's writing skills are pretty good, and I hope he can continue to work hard. If it were to be collected everywhere, if it could write four to five million words, I would be sure to follow it. Now I have a few suggestions, please take a look at them!!! The first one is the title of each chapter, don't repeat it! Very sensory-sensitive. The second is to take advantage of the fact that there may be fewer people reading it now, and find a way to revise all the chapters that mention An Yilunye, deal with them or downplay them. This character is a famous green turtle who is reviled by others. He wants to break away from the relationship and get rid of him, but also plans to play games with him. The author doesn't want to think about the fact that everyone in it is the protagonist's harem, and adding An Yilun is nothing.

I don't understand, what's the use of copying these daily skills?

No matter how much the ghoul's combat power is increased, it can still compete with modern light firepower. Kirishima Douka puts Haku in Demon Slayer and flies up to start sweeping. The power of the lower limit submachine gun and the upper limit of small machine cannon is really higher than hers in Demon Slayer. Hugh is actually cheaper than the breathing method, so he was blown away by Demon Slayer.

To be honest, your book is either a variety comic or a chat**, rather than spending a lot of ink to write about reality. However, the reality is that there is no way to skip the variety comics, so chat** is a hurdle that cannot be skipped. Those who like chat** will think that you always write reality, and those who like variety comics will think that chat** is a failure. Basically, after reading this kind of reality and chat**, the scores of 82% are not good.

According to the setting, isn't it true that when the Ghost King dies, all the ghosts disappear and there is no need to look for them? Did I remember it wrong?

In daily life, the protagonist acts as if he doesn't have those special abilities... To be honest, if you don't use them, you don't have to write to obtain these special abilities, especially vector manipulation.

It's been a long time since I've seen a novel that foreshadows time travel, so I'm going to vote for it. I just like to see them all belong to Qingmei, otherwise why would I travel through time in advance? You should make preparations in advance if you travel through time in advance. I would like to give you a little suggestion. I think you only have a few animations at the beginning. Can you modify them? Just change it to wait, if the author wants to add the world later... If not, it will be fine. I think there are some childhood sweethearts who no longer live there for some reason. Or just write down something that hasn't come out yet and keep in touch with the male protagonist. It adds up so well. How great would it be if the heroine and the supporting cast were both childhood sweethearts of the hero? Especially if you have a CP, you must write like this. If you don't have one, you can just leave it alone. Then when the male protagonist is playing with them, he will educate them and show their self-protection skills to show that they will not be taken advantage of. Just for the male protagonist to see this, Kato Hiromi wants to take it! Also, may I ask who else is being charged? Shizuka Hiratsuka, don't go on a blind date, think of a better reason, such as taking care of the hero?

What exactly is the main line?! The chat at the beginning is not long, but now the protagonist is moved by herself and plays the game passionately every day, and she is convinced. Don't add chat skirts when writing about daily life. Let's reopen it.

Who is to blame for the data discrepancy? You didn't pay attention to the fact that chat** is seriously separated from daily life. You haven't dealt with it well at all. Either it's just daily life, or if you have chat**, write extraordinary daily life. The abilities gained in chat** must be used in daily life. Some things that can be solved by showing extraordinary power still have to work hard to put the cart before the horse...

Your copy system is too slow and the copying is too slow.