Film and TV: From the Start, I Have the Power of the Galaxy

If you are sick or not, if you don't know how to write about the heroine, don't write about it. Either just mention it in one go, or accept it all. It's better than writing like this. Several of your books are like this. You have written them so many times and you still don't know how to change them. And don't you know what kind of writing style Fei Lu is? Feilu is the style of harem writing. Of course, it's not impossible to write a female protagonist, but look at what you write. There are several books where the heroine has problems, so either don't include them so that you don't have to spend so much time describing them, or you should include them all. It's really annoying that you can't get up or down like this. The emotional line still develops according to the original plot, so why don't I just go watch that TV series? Speechless!

The protagonist is the true Virgin: 1. When I was a child, I was tricked by Lin Xi and lost the qualification to participate in the Olympiad. I endured it because my child was still young after all. 2. Someone adopts someone, but the protagonist is unwilling to do so, but he still says in front of people, "I can help you double your assets within a year, and you also give advice on other people's business routes. Are you such a monster, do you want to scare others to death?" In the end, they didn't take him in and gave him some donations, but the protagonist didn't get anything. 3. Help Lin Miaomiao and Deng Xiaoqi in high school, just think you are enjoying your daily life 4. After having a falling out with Lin Miaomiao, I found someone online to help him make up for his sex. Will you die if you don't help him? 5. Help Jiang Haotian's family tide over the difficulties. At first, it was about investment, but when it came to the end, it turned into a loan. They only asked for the farm as a mortgage, but they were too embarrassed to force it on you. 6. I saw Zhang Chi while having a meal. I don't know you even if I'm not related to you, and even though I clearly rejected you, I still insist on helping someone participate in the competition. I don't know how many stops there will be in this competition, but at least N million. All the benefits will be given to the club. I got it. As far as selling Honor games is concerned, the protagonist can handle it well, and the rest is just to give people warmth.

The heroine was written in a mess, either single or multiple. Lin Miaomiao's role had so much foreshadowing. I thought her ending would change, but it ended up returning to the original plot, together with Qian Sanyi. So what's the point of writing her? Moreover, don't you know that it is taboo for Fei Lu to send a girl away? If you don't want to accept it, then don't write about it. Let's not talk about Lin Zhaoxi going to Pei Zhi. She doesn't have many roles to begin with, but Lin Miaomiao has so many emotional scenes, and the male protagonist has done so much for her. But in the end, you beat her to death and sent her to Qian Sanyi. What's going on? Do you also want to let Zhou Linlin and Fang Yuke be together after their relationship develops? Isn't it the purpose of fan fiction to see different changes and pictures of the heroine's body? It would be better for you to just put some words into it and forget about it. Then what's the point of writing this novel? Anyway, I will not subscribe to this novel. The reason is very simple. I feel uncomfortable reading it. It feels like I took off my pants and you read this to me. It's tasteless and it's a pity to throw it away.

Seriously, stop writing romantic dramas. I seriously doubt that you are some red-haired monster's apprentice or son. Let's not say whether it is a harem or a single heroine. I don't even know the heroine's name now. At the beginning, I thought she was Xu Qin, but it kept disappearing after that. Lost, another Lin Miaomiao came out, and then that one came out, but it was not the same, and then another Zhou Linlin appeared. Why do I feel so familiar, the male protagonist's feelings for her, and good guys, isn't this equivalent to another Lin Miaomiao?

This can be cut directly. There is no progress in writing a female protagonist. In Chapter 26, Qian Sanyi is lying in her arms, right? I suggest you not write Fei Lu again.

To be honest, this arrangement of the heroine is not reasonable at all. The hero is too perfect. The heroine is not worthy of him at all. If you don't open a harem, you will be sorry for the hero. The key is to have power and still be an innocent novice. I am speechless. Do you want to imitate Ge Xiaolun and become the strongest loser in the known universe?!!!!

Stop writing it. The emotional drama is superfluous and there is so much foreshadowing, but nothing has changed. Speaking of single women, so many heroines have appeared, and speaking of harems, so many heroines have been mixed up with others. Then I read the author's other books, and I was speechless. It was the Gou Xue novel I had read before. In that novel with demon pupil, the male protagonist and the female protagonist loved each other so much that they would sacrifice their lives for each other. However, a small misunderstanding led to a dramatic breakup, and they broke up suddenly without any progress at all. This book inherits all the poisonous points of that novel

Well, I don't want to say it anymore. To be honest, author, if you write on other novel websites, as long as you update hundreds of chapters, others may be too lazy to care about your poisonous points and have a higher tolerance. But in Feilu, maybe we are not very tolerant of your poisonous points and may not be able to accept it. To be honest, after reading the latest chapter 145, I am a little confused about the position and identity of the protagonist. After the disappearance of my wife, why don't you immediately start revenge and reconciliation? Solving this problem has been delayed for ten chapters. You are a bit intellectual, and the protagonist's revenge is also a bit intellectual. I have always said that wealth is a by-product of knowledge, but your method of revenge feels that knowledge is not enough. I feel that the author wants to skimp on the word count, but why are you here? Even the emotional interaction between your wife and your wife is better than yours. First of all, given the positioning and identity of the protagonist, especially Blue Star, who is the best You are a scientist, and you are very powerful. You can be said to be the most powerful existence in the world. You have the strength of nuclear explosions. Your parents are not here. What are you afraid of? You can retaliate directly, especially if you still have evidence and you are the husband of the victim. In this situation where the right time, place and people are present, if you retaliate, others may even hand you a gun. Even if you secretly use wisdom or artificial intelligence to retaliate, it is better than this method of revenge. And Let's think about the word count, you can write down the word count for such revenge, and your method of revenge is just that, it is equivalent to a president or chairman of a country stabbing a knife himself in order to take revenge. Your writing is so low, and you have added new poisonous points in order to write revenge. I really admire it. Even if the woman named Jiang died, you can't deny the fact that the protagonist slept with her. This is another conflict with the protagonist's personality.

To be honest, it's okay for the protagonists in other novels to have a harem at the beginning, but you spent a lot of ink before to write the protagonist as a very dedicated and dedicated person. Now his wife is missing, and instead of trying to use his own wisdom to find it, he goes to a bar to get drunk and then finds a girlfriend. To be honest, this actually conflicts with the protagonist's personality. It feels like a poisonous point to people who read it. To be honest, I thought that the wife's disappearance was to foreshadow the ether. I didn't expect that the particle incident might be paving the way for the six gems in the future. But are you planning to create a new heroine or not? I suggest not to create a new heroine. After all, creating a new heroine will have a great conflict with the protagonist's character. Moreover, just after his wife disappeared, he found a new one. Before, he has always shown a dedicated and single-minded character. This feels very hypocritical. I think normal people don't like a hypocritical person.

That woman named Jiang, nothing has been resolved yet, she is upset when she sees it, she is obviously responsible for the disappearance of the person, and she knows that she is the cause, why don't you teach her a serious lesson quickly?