From the Dharma King of the Kingdom of Light, Take Stock of the Top Ten Kings

In fact, Ran Min was raised by Hu people. The Internet boasted that he had the ability to kill Hu Ling. In fact, he definitely killed no less Han people than Hu people. If you look at the ten philosophers of the Net Temple, you will know what is going on. It is recommended to change him to another general.

The protagonist of this book. It is useless when it is not hung up. . Even if it hangs up, it's still useless.

Author, stop insulting Zhang Sanfeng! Be careful of being ripped off

The author has a good grasp of the plot, but the dialogue is too awkward and many places are incomprehensible. The character of the protagonist should be patriotic and a very ambitious person. This has been true since time travel to the time when he conquered Blue Star Color, but when it comes to Lilith, things start to get awkward. From the perspective of the protagonist, Lilith not only has great influence, but also has a great family background. As a result, the protagonist starts to feel embarrassed, saying that if Lilith is forced, let her become your own woman. Do you think Lilith and Lan Xingcai are on the same level? Become an ally first and then accept them later. Not only is the dialogue awkward, but the protagonist has already become obsessed with it. And the dialogue in other places is also awkward. For example, the lord who wants to sue the male protagonist tells the male protagonist, "Are you feeling scared now?" . . . . Really, I suggest that the author really can't do it. He should use less dialogue and more description. I don't know what your original intention is to express, but your dialogue is too awkward, just like an elementary school student. If it weren't for other aspects, I would have done it earlier. I hope the author can adopt it.

I coerced and coerced all day long, but in the end, I was still a

What's the meaning? Your baby-loving wife is hugging Zhang Wenfeng's waist? Can you write this? I'm speechless. I was quite happy to see the same person as the transfer student, but I didn't expect that what you wrote was so vicious.

Under the high-pressure environment of promoting Northern dialect and big policies, you will not end well in Cantonese if you go against the official government.

It's exactly the same pattern as the one I saw, so it's boring.

I think the reason Uchiha became so weak later was because of peace.

I don't even know how to copy official documents, and I even added plots to it. You're just going to eat this and change your career.

Can the author add a heroine in the future and add the little loli Sakui Momoi from "The Wasted Daily Life of a High School Girl"?

This Wangshu makes me feel uncomfortable no matter how I look at it. Doesn't the protagonist's essence and blood cost money? Always want

Is the author a cuckold? If you don't want to write, you don't have to mess with readers like this.

I thought of Abu under Stonehenge again. It must have been almost ten years ago.

The relationship with the introduction is not written at all now.

Write less and smile lightly, call your mother a ghost

Jack uses the Spyli Ao beam? Shouldn't it be Specium Ray or Xinarama Ray? I don't remember the specific one used in the plot, but the Spyrio beam belongs to Orb.

Here comes another ** who is unkind and treats all things as cud*. Hahahaha, it made me laugh to death. He just used it even though he didn't even understand what it meant.

The exact same book is called, please be careful when reading comics

Author, please don't be stingy and give the protagonist 100,000 bad luck charms in the next episode.

Judging from the title of the book, the protagonist is not afraid of being killed. This is not the second dimension. There is a limit to human tolerance.

What is chapter forty-nine about?

Simply, there is nothing more poisonous than this. The mess is serious. The Dark Side exists to be punished. The plot drags. Water is not good

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