
People in the Navy: Disobey Orders and Become Stronger!
人在海军:违令就变强!
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 466k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Faloo
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There are indeed problems ahead. Ace has always regretted it after he was caught. He will never say such things as Whitebeard is coming. Do you dare to be arrogant? What he hopes most is that no one will come.
Many of the characters are very strange and deviate from the original work
Is the author portraying Ace like a brainless person? His words sound like someone who just graduated from elementary school. He doesn't have the feeling of One Piece. I'm not licking Ace. It looks like scribbling.
Have you found a loophole? There are obviously chili oil, pepper and other seasonings, but no one has tried them?
Although I also hate Escap, what you wrote is too outrageous and is completely different from the original work.
The most annoying thing is Ace Luffy and the Marines. This is the second book where I finally stopped licking both sides.
However, why do you want to oppose the navy later?... Sengoku, and Aokiji, are not bad for the protagonist, right? ... Why did he die? ... This is no longer a question of whether you are happy or not, it has already touched the moral bottom line.
How should I put it? I can't say it's not well written, I can only say it's nonsense.
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