Wuxia Crossover: The Villain’s Assistant, with Kabuto Yakushi’s Template from the Start

The effort and reward are not directly proportional, and the author's path is narrow. According to what you write now, he is just a nanny. You have to be self-centered, and each villain only needs to help once, instead of being tied to a tree and hanging to death like now, and directly going their separate ways to find other villains. As for what other dreams the villains have, let them come to you instead of staying by their side as a nanny. Then there is no benefit for the protagonist to help them, which is also a poisonous point, don't tell me. System rewards are benefits, but they are two different things. They are given by the system and have nothing to do with the villain, so you must learn to use them. To use an analogy, for example, Villain No. 1 Needs something, and Villain No. 2 Happens to have it. When Villain No. 2 Asks you for help, can you ask for it, and then use it to ask Villain No. 1 For benefits? After that, the villain will still have to remember your favor and get the benefits again. There is also a system reward. Let's look at what you have written now.

Nanny. The main character is a pure nanny

Fei Lu is going to die, and there are 21 chapters in one glance. It's so damn poisonous.

No more writing? The introduction is ok, but the reviews say it's not good, so I'll give it a try.

After reading it, I feel good, and I don't think it is very poisonous. The story is told in a bland way, that is, Jiumozhi should have learned the Xiaowuxiang Gong long ago. Of course, I may have remembered it wrong, but it doesn't matter.

Commentary on Chapter 4: The Realm of Cultivation, True Martial Arts Pills written by Fei Rudao, "Zongwu: Villain's Assistant, and the Pharmacist's Pocket Template for the Beginning".