The Martial Arts World: From the Start, I Was a Huashan Disciple With a Book of Beautiful Women

Tell a joke, Tian Boguang is not bad

Just kidding, after you have perfected the Secret of Immortality, you are in an acquired state, isn't it an innate state?

When I read Chapter 4, the protagonist spent 25 years to get the vitality card to Xiantian. The system appeared too ordinary and the author had to criticize the word count every time it appeared. Moreover, the author's writing style felt very immature. In addition, the protagonist Yue Bu raised you from the age of three. You included the skills of Si Guoya. You yourself said that these skills were of no use to you, so why didn't you tell Yue? The character of the protagonist you wrote is very contradictory. How should I put it? He misses the Holy Mother but doesn't know how to repay his kindness. It feels like Linghu Chong No. 2. Author, please restart. The character setting and writing skills of the protagonist are too poor.

I feel like it's boring no matter how much I study. It's too data-based.

It would be better to change the name, Zongwu: Jimei Book, starting from Huashan!

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Commentary on Chapter 1 of "Zongwu Zongwu: Wulin Jimei Book Begins with Disciples of Huashan" written by Yibei Shanquanshui, "The Disciple of Huashan Begins with the System" (Requesting Data for the New Book).

Commentary on Chapter 2 of "Zongwu: Wulin Jimei Album Begins with Huashan Disciples" written by Yibei Shanquanshui. Wulin Jimei Album Exchange Treasure Box (request for flower collection rewards and data for the new book).