Film and TV: A Little Succubus from the Start, Feeding Yingzi Imported Candy

I don't even know where the rhythm comes from. You tell the protagonist to grow up quickly. You are here to make a joke. Do you believe it or not? Let the author hold a poll. The child pulling the cart is far ahead. From the very beginning, the introduction tells you what kind of story this is. You have to come in and find faults. Is it interesting? Just turn it off if you don't want to read it. Where do all these things come from? And there are those with height. I don't know what you think. If a young shota starts out at 1.7 Meters, then he can't be called a shota. Shota means young, cute and cute. Who is 1.7 Meters tall and would think he is a shota at a glance?

It has been fully booked, but I have only kept it for a few days, and there are a few more poisonous spots. Give the key to a man, no matter how you look at it, you will react in disgust. Qiao Yingzi and Huang Zhitao said that they were working together, and their relationship with Fang Yifan dropped to a freezing point. Everyone hated Fang Yifan. As a result, when something happened to Fang Yifan, one of them said they couldn't let it go, and the other said they were classmates after all. As a result, they ran to the hospital overnight and stayed there all night. To be honest, in reality, even friends would not go to the hospital unless they were good friends, let alone an annoying classmate from the same school, or even a classmate. While talking about annoying and ordinary classmates, he ran to the hospital to see Fang Yifan. According to what you said, why don't the other "ordinary students" in the school come to see it? Because you don't care about other people's affairs. Who cares about you as an ordinary classmate? The heroine said this as if she was trying to cover up. Or is it that the heroines who have broken up with Fang Yifan still have great feelings for Fang Yifan?

So, Fei Lu recently released another Succubus universe?

Also, the priority of the protagonist is too low. She is obviously a succubus, but it turns out that the heroine's priority in her heart is a little higher than ordinary things. Things that are of interest or whim can overwhelm the protagonist. When she is doing something exciting, she will not hesitate to leave for irrelevant things and leave it to the protagonist. If you really can't write, can you go read the notebook? Just search for "succubus" or "yellow hair" and see what other people write. In a few minutes, it can replace the heroine's highest status in the heart. Succubus/yellow hair is whatever they say, they are S's family. Succubus/yellow hair can't leave even if they don't agree. This is called the highest priority. What the hell did you write? This is called the protagonist, the succubus? Not a talking crape myrtle stick? Oh no, the Ziwei stick is thrown away after using it up. The heroine has thrown away the main character she was using for an unrelated person. The treatment is not as good as the Ziwei stick.

The most important thing is to accept Song Qian and Tong Wenjie. How cool is it to have so many sisters-in-law?

The protagonist is an adult who traveled through time and became a child. He is not a real child. Don't write about acting cute and coquettish, it will give you goosebumps.

Why do you want to write about Qiao Yingzi going to see Fang Yifan, the bird feather? It's all done. It's completely unnecessary to stay in the hospital for so long.

How did you come up with the idea of ​​letting another man have your room key? Have you become an idiot by pretending to be a child?

It is said to be a succubus body, but the protagonist actually shows a weak physique. If it was really a succubus body, Qiao Yingzi and the others would have been captured long ago.

At the age of thirteen, when cooking in the kitchen, I had to step on the bench and tiptoe to reach it. How short is this person?