High School DxD: Reborn After Getting Killed, I Become a Demon

Please, you still don't understand what I mean? You wrote that marriage redemption story, but Rias didn't like Yi Cheng at all? Your prostitution article will definitely include Rias in the future, but you ended up writing a paragraph on the redemption of marriage in this city. How else do you want to accept Rias? If you accept her, Rias will become a brainless girl. If you don't accept her, she will become a bitch. And in a sex-selling novel, you write a male protagonist who is a gentleman without any desire? The male protagonist who has no desire is just like Ruozhi, how can you let people watch it? The family members immediately thought that they were all male thugs? Have you ever read the article you wrote? 7.8 Points is not unreasonable, brother, if you still want to continue to quibble with the theory of your article. Then I won't accompany you anymore. You don't even listen to the readers' opinions, so why don't you just tell us that we are just skipping reading? Please jump and watch? **Why should we jump to read the article? Reflect on your own problems, 7.8 Points. I'm really interested in your topic article. After all, no one has written about DXD first. But what you wrote is indeed a mess. If I were the only one to say so, forget it. See for yourself how many people are talking about your problem. I only advise you to sell pornographic articles and don't write about being a gentleman and having a harem. Then the original male protagonist dies or stays away, and his family members are only women instead of male thugs. You don't even know how to write this article. If you don't like it, who will?

Translate the author's pinned message: 1. That's not a poisonous point, it's because you readers are too pretentious. 2. I explained what I wanted to do later, but I won't change or delete it before.

Putting a pervert among the girls you have booked is not poisoning her? This is the kind of author that people say. Force feeding shit

The heroines that have been confirmed so far include Shitori Sona, Shinra Tsubaki, Himejima Akeno, Tashiro Koji, Asia and other main female characters in Devil High School. Regarding Rias, I have been worrying about how to write the plot better. At present, the plot in this aspect has been completely sorted out, so everyone should not be confused. As for the so-called reincarnation of Issei, he slept naked with Rias. I will explain it later when I write the plot here. Please don't think about it in the anime. Of course, it's also my problem that I didn't explain it in detail earlier. After all, the initial planning was about Rias's plot. It's my lack of consideration, it's my problem! I apologize to everyone here!

There are very few books in Feilu with a score lower than 9.8. This book has a score of 7.8, Which can only be said to be unbelievable.

Um, I didn't dare to read the comment section at the first glance. You wrote a fanfic about this world without removing the original male protagonist? Everything else is normal. You know exactly what this is and you still want to write out the original male protagonist. Don't you think there is a little need to patch it up? Moreover, most readers will never buy it if it is written. People will have preconceived notions. Most of them care about the appearance of the original male protagonist, rather than the so-called original male protagonist who has modified the plot and can write whatever he wants. I have read this fanfic and almost no author dares to let the original protagonist live or take away the golden finger of the original male protagonist and become a passerby without a plot. You not only have a plot but also work under the male protagonist. I can't comment.

The heroine just gave it away like this, right?

Cao, the author, you just want to be scolded and then feel happy, right? When Issei Hyoudou became Rias's dependent, he slept naked with Rias, and even gave in when the hero saved the beauty. Isn't this a proper gift of a daughter? I don't even know how to write a book. Readers will definitely run away when they see this. No matter how good your explanation is in the subsequent patch, others will not continue to read it after they get ex. If I had known you were such an ex, I wouldn't have opened your book. As soon as I opened it, I curiously looked at the comment area. When I looked at the comment area, I felt like I had eaten a few kilograms. I came to Fei Lu to write the book I ordered. Isn't this a scolding?

Hyoudou Issei is already a member of Rias's family. There is no special explanation, which means they are already together. Fruit. Sleep. It's passed, it's awesome to write like this

What about the harem? You said that your protagonist is a type who is not active in starting a harem, so aren't you inferior to the original protagonist? Oh, the original protagonist actually has a harem in your book, so that's okay