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I'm wondering why nowadays, no matter how strong the protagonist in comic novels is, he has to be a high school student. Is this kind of "playing house" interesting?

Well, actually what I want to say is why when writing about Xiaori, why not change it to Xiaori Province or Xiaori Autonomous Region? Does it deserve its own country??*???*?

After seeing the latest two chapters, I was a little disappointed. The character of Emiya Kiritsugu is hated by many people. You can write about Sungei, and you can even write about Illya, but if you want to clean up the character or keep Emiya Kiritsugu, it will be too disappointing.

If you can cut off the beard in advance, do you have to turn it into a second-hand one and then collect it? I can already guess the plot behind it. It's just to kill Kiritsugu and then take over. Then why not travel to an earlier time and intercept Hu? I don't understand.

If you make a mistake, you will be beaten, and then correct the mistake! I have revised the contents of chapters 26 to 28, and the poisonous points you mentioned have been eradicated from the source. Friends who have watched it before can wait for the refresh. If you still can't see it after refreshing, you need to clear the cache. After clearing the cache, you can see the modified content. If there are any problems in the future, if you bring them up I will correct them. This time, I tried my best to do it. So can you please stop scolding me? Mengxin was trembling. If you are satisfied with the new content, it would be great if you could vote for flowers, monthly votes or evaluation votes. It would be humble.

The previous writing was quite good, but chapter twenty-six immediately collapsed.

How should I put it, chat text, if it is a domestic game or Chinese comic martial arts character, and the protagonist's name is Xiaoli or a foreign name in the West, I will have a feeling that Xiaoli is leading the Chinese people, which is very uncomfortable. If it is not a domestic character or a Japanese comic, and the protagonist is called a foreign name, I will not have much feeling.

This name is really uncomfortable to look at. Xing Yue is badly written, and it's not interesting to read again.

There is a poisonous point at the beginning. Why can't the time-travel comics be directly Chinese? Forget it. The most important thing is that you also emphasize, There are also travels through the comic book world, invincible at the beginning, the protagonist either sees through the world or is violent and violent, and forcefully recruits women, there is no normal one, they are all invincible, flirting with the heroine, daily life, etc.

From the sentence you pinned at the top about body reshaping, I know that you don't know what's wrong with what you wrote. Can you cut it off and create a brand new one without having to renovate it after someone else has used it? Returning a wife, if you cut off her husband, wouldn't she become the protagonist's own wife? I can accept married women, but I don't accept meaningless wives. What makes me speechless is not only Irisviel, but also Illya and Artoria. You could easily kill three of them at once, but now you can only take over. How invincible the protagonist was in your previous portrayal, then it will be very unpleasant to watch here.