The Outcast: I Take Xia He to Meet the Old Celestial Master!

? The beginning is poisonous. The protagonist takes Xia He to find Zhang Lingyu. Xia He is disliked by Zhang Lingyu. The protagonist takes Xia He away. Xia He also wants to control the protagonist. The protagonist also wants to accept Xia He. Chu, if you don't like the beginning, just abandon the book. Who cares if you suppress your desire first? There is also the part where the protagonist fights against the four crazy people. What kind of acting skills and top-notch dialogues are there? Don't you think it's embarrassing? You even had the nerve to call the title Acting Emperor. When I looked at the title, I thought the protagonist was a character similar to Zhang Lingyu. After having a relationship with Xia He, he went to the Heavenly Master to admit it, but ended up writing such a top-notch poisonous point. I just accepted it. If you accept girls, you will accept girls. Why do the current authors insist on making these bloody plots. The protagonist lets the woman go unconditionally and agrees to her conditions. It is okay to be beaten and scolded. The protagonist's survival and victory are not due to the woman's conscience and her mercy. It is all due to the protagonist's fortune, fate, ability and strength. After fighting back, he lets the woman go just to accept her. The only difference between this kind of protagonist and a licking dog The other is that the protagonist succeeds in the end, and the heroine has no other attractive qualities besides being beautiful. She is reluctant to be with the hero at the beginning and even loves other men in her heart. She pleads with the protagonist for other men and goes against the protagonist. In the end, the heroine falls in love with the protagonist because of the long-term unconditional dedication of the hero and the long-term love. It is like living together after a successful blind date. If you write that the male protagonist is excellent, and the female protagonist is attracted to him, and then pursues him, wouldn't it be nice, and the male protagonist is also attracted to the female protagonist, and then pursues them in both directions, wouldn't it be nice? It doesn't require you to be very innovative, your writing style is passable, and you don't write any poisonous points, just use a sweet template.

You also accepted Xia He, who was already disliked by Zhang Lingyu, and the protagonist was a swordsman, and you wrote that he was very lethal, but the four mad men ambush one of them and refused to kill him, and even said that it would be useful in the future. The protagonist has already opened up with Lao Tianshi 37. Why do you need these people? Author, you should be more conscious.

I've collected them all, ** Come on, I gave a girl to Zhang Lingyu at the beginning of the chapter, **

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