In My Later Years, When I Attained the Holy Body, I Can Travel Through Time and Become a God.

The protagonist, pure virgin bitch, a person who killed your entire family and your wife, you don't want to kill him because he protects you? You have to know that he trained you to devour your true nature. You are so stupid. I will give you one star. No thanks.

After reading twenty chapters, I didn't see the appearance of a lonely patient at all.

I don't know the content, but the comment section must be very exciting.

This is so frustrating, no matter how awesome you are, what cheats you have, what tricks you have, as long as you are in the prehistoric world, you can't escape the fate of being a slave to Tongtian. No matter you are the Immortal Emperor, you will work hard and uncomplainingly as a slave of Jiejiao. Even if there are many monsters in this sect, they enjoy eating people, you have to save them, because these authors who write about prehistoric times are born with low bones. They are used to kneeling and like to lick Jiejiao.

In the prehistoric times, you, the Great Holy Body, could not even become an immortal.

The ruthless emperor wanted a hairy protector, and in the background above the sacrifice, anyone who encountered such terrible luck would have an unknown future for the whole family, including his own brother, who could not resist it.

He poisoned him at the beginning, wiped out Xiaole from the nine tribes, and wrote something random, forcing himself to put gold on his face, and he still had the nerve to say that he would protect the way for a ruthless person. What difference does it make between you and me? It's okay if you can save his brother, but in the end there is no hair, just forcefully build a relationship, it's wrong for you to be such a ****, do ruthless people need you to protect him? Why don't you pay him back? I can't do it without you. Have you never read the original work or are you still trying to put money on your face, adding drama to yourself and weakening the ruthless person? Does it bother you to explain this and that? What you wrote is a fan, not original. Why do you have so many introductions? What's the word count? Chapter 2**

Another author who graduated from a Japanese school and doesn't understand Chinese novels,

The Immortal King can't kill the Supreme Immortal instantly, I'm drunk too

If I come back, I will wear a purple gold crown with phoenix wings on my head; if I fight to the death, I will wear that golden armor with chains; if I abandon kindness, I will abandon the lotus root silk and walk on the clouds; if I show hatred, I will turn the iron rod nine times in vain; if the stone does not see the sun and moon, if the stone does not survive the wind and waves ; How can the world have my name, how can God know that I am untamed; I have been shining for hundreds of years, and the time flies by like a shuttle; I can find my nature in a canoe, dare to ask the gods and Buddhas who gave me the enlightenment; realize my small sadness and joy of things, and take pity on the fate of my family; ordinary people think of longevity, I I have endless dreams and change my destiny by entering the earth; I am unarmed, but a warrior will drive away all my beings; thousands of heavens will drive me to the end of the world, and hundreds of lives will rob me of my years; the copper furnace casts my eyes into crystals, eats gods and immortals and destroys my soul; longevity and five elements Accompany me in the fight, and my armored steel body rises from purgatory; I dig out the sea and beat the waves to seize my belongings, subverting the authority of the unruly wind and sand; fighting in the three realms, I am the only one who is the only one, and the long red one hangs the myth of the sky; hate has not turned into a demon, I have not become a monster, and I will let the world judge me harshly. Ignorance has not yet become madness, enlightenment has not yet occurred.

After reading Chapter 2, I felt that there was something wrong with the protagonist. The school beauty who was dating the protagonist was really blind. What is the difference between the protagonist and the scumbag?

After the prehistoric era passed through Jinxian, there will be no cross-border talk. The gap is too big.

Subsystem? Does the family life subsystem also reward the protagonist for not having a son? Your son is giving birth to a grandson, and you are giving birth to a daughter. Your daughter's birth is someone else's, and there's some shitty reward.

No, an Immortal King beats a bunch of people and even the Great Emperor is not the Supreme. Chapter 4 or 5 is so messed up. It's written like a piece of shit. You are really awesome.

To put it bluntly, no matter how old the protagonist is, he can still be the protagonist no matter how old he is. Even if he is 99 years old, he can still be the protagonist. He is a child, and it is normal for him to be coquettish and cute like his mother. Even when I grow up, I will occasionally go after my mother and be mean, hahaha.

There's something wrong with saying "Don't step on others and praise them", you can't say it?, You're stepping on the sore spot of some ancient people, right? Haha, don't define others privately, there are a lot of lame excuses, saying that you used to be so perfect, so you scream without restraint?

The Demon Tokio is a full knight, not only Heisei, Showa, but also the current Reiwa.

Yes, the protagonist of this work is truly heroic.

Anyone who says your mother is Gong Li is not that outrageous.

Yamato? Is it the one who looks female but is actually male? At first, he was also said to be Suo Da CP

The previous book Night Tiger was very good, I hope this one will be the same.

Underworld is just a decoration?

Be the author! Mutants again! This is your Ma Marvel! ! !

As the title says, it's just Nan Xizi's words…………

Looking at it, there are some messy chapters.

The author forgot to take a snack when he went out. How much is a pound of 100,000 oceans? Can two people carry it? During the Republic of China, 22 oceans were worth a pound. Please do the math.

I don't understand why the fan fiction written by us Chinese are so stupid. Apart from writing about beautiful women's harems and being bulldozers, do we really not know how to write about real things? No wonder so many people like Little Japan's anime. If Little Japan saw such a novel, I would be embarrassed to say that it was written by a Chinese. How can we in China not write bulldozer novels?

Seriously, did you really write this book? I don't believe it. There is a huge difference between your introduction and the main text!

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