One Person: Reported Feng Baobao at the Beginning!

It gives me a bland feeling when I look at it The protagonist has a good temper. My first impression is that I feel the same way. To be honest, Fei Lu's writing is not popular. I think it's good in many aspects. But the problem is that this is Fei Lu. Normally speaking, the protagonist is domineering and invincible. The two Xu family members have to be respectful anyway. The author did not arrange a deliberately poisonous or impotent protagonist, but even if he is aggrieved again and again, some people can't stand it cumulatively. I know that at that time, the background situation, the protagonist's temperament, and what is most likely to happen are indeed what the plot presents, but it just doesn't fit with the public's aesthetics. A faster pace would be better, let alone Feilu's environment. Moreover, there are some fluctuations in the plot. For example, we have to decide and think about the heroine. Whether it is a pacing issue or not at all, how can we say how to do it? Use it. If you can see that you have ideas, I support you. Of course, it depends on whether you want to cater to everyone or be more individual.

The little devil with eyes, Mao Lilan, has been taken advantage of

Is there no law in this alien world? As long as a person is found to be abnormal, or too smart, or does not have clear personal information, must he be killed or imprisoned? If he dares to resist, his whole family will be threatened with death? ? ? Holy shit! ! The real danger is that if someone kills someone, just say that person has Qi in him.

Long Yang Dao Body? Is the protagonist a good man?

She is a green tea bitch, not a holy mother

Well, pig's feet are mentally retarded. Standard elementary school literature

If you're not a buddy, why would you write about the Great Love Immortal? It feels a bit abstract

Why don't one of them destroy other countries and unify the world?

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The two chapters of Hatching Harpy are so weirdly written, as if the writing suddenly fell off a cliff. What happened to the author?

This eleven is a bit stiff

The writing is too boring, routine, and not interesting at all.

I took a look and found out that the protagonist was plotted against... I can't help but feel frustrated.

Cowardly lick*, not even as good as a fucking turtle bastard, pure coward*

I feel like you could write a little faster, bro. The book is a good book, as long as you don't write to the back, just look for the gunman.

Chapter 11 made me vomit! Just bear with the people in the company! Haha, the protagonist is two-faced, look at it!

Chapter 43 is available now So fast, I thought it would be at least 50 chapters

Anyone who comes to the Shaolin Temple can easily show the strength of the Golden Core Realm, another one;

I want to ask you guys, this has something to do with my follow-up plot arrangements.

I have 2 monthly passes and all the flower evaluation votes are given. Please update as soon as possible.

In the next episode, the protagonist uses Sanwei Zhenhuo

Just don't forget the mythical beast Zygarde

Commentary on the release of "Tomb Robbers: I Can Perfectly Play the Little Brother" written by Sanqian Daoren.

Next episode: A 10,000-ton meteorite falls from the sky

Everyone is urging me to update. In another two months, I will have to wait for a year.

Watching a cartoon again

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