Naruto: The Uchiha with One Soul and Two Bodies
木叶：一魂双体的宇智波
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 141k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
58Chapters
1.7MReads
23.5kFlowers
10.0Score
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Reader comments 42
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The idea is good, but one soul and two bodies are a bit dull. There is a lovely sister, but it turns out that he is the fuck guy living in it. I feel that I am blind and have the psychological discomfort of occupying a female body. To be honest, it is better to become a soul and have a body. The male body has memories, and the female body has memories. She is a new personality born from half of her own soul, a sister with true self-awareness, who can also share memories and communicate with her heart. This is much better than the one-soul and two-body sister who is essentially a puppet incarnation and is an awkward woman.
Don't do any parallel worlds or clones. This is purely selfish. If you do it, you will really be spitting on one person.
Generally speaking, when writing about one soul and two bodies, the two will be treated as the main body, just like the two protagonists, both of whom have a strong sense of existence. This writing is like the male protagonist having an extra female puppet, and the female body has no sense of existence and is just a puppet tool.
It is recommended to remove attributes, such as physique, strength, etc., Because most authors cannot write about the expressiveness of these attributes, which are easy to collapse. If the attributes are ten times that of normal people, the expressiveness is not as good as the captain of the United States. A 50/50 performance (collapse) does not count. His strength is not worthy of the battlefield. Others are strong and have better equipment and abilities, but they are not as strong as him with eliminated equipment and abilities. This type of collapse is called forced 50/50.
The dialogue layout is a bit weird
It is known that the eternal kaleidoscope can be opened by transplanting the kaleidoscope of a relative. The question then arises, is the cornea or the eyeball transplanted? Whether it's the cornea or the eyeball, is it possible that when two brothers open a kaleidoscope and exchange their eyes, they will have two pairs of eternal kaleidoscopes?
If you know how, you should criticize it carefully.
The author should not listen to the suggestion in the comments section to add glamour. I would say that the author can refer to Fei Lu's fanfic of a ship girl, which also has one soul and two bodies, and the results are not bad.
Come on, don't stop updating, the subject matter is very novel, and the writing is not bad either.
It's a waste. The protagonist doesn't go to the battlefield right away. When the attributes are low, he can train and improve himself. The ninjas in Naruto are not strong physically, and their physical skills rely entirely on chakra bonus. The three body skills are blinding methods. The original author of Naruto has been eating the settings over and over again. Come on.