
Age of Discovery: Two Sea Kings in One Family, and My Sister Is White Star
大航海:一门双海王,妹妹白星
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 359k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
112Chapters
2.2MReads
9.3kFlowers
9.9Score
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Reader comments 50
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What qualifications does Jinbe, a weakling, have to make decisions for you? Moreover, a slave with the third surname is more ruthless than Lu Bu. It is normal to stab someone in the back for any moral reason.
After Jinbe appeared, the author felt that the plot was not well written. The protagonist should not consider his opinions, or should directly put his strength in front of him and convince him. You are a king, and that is your own power. Is it someone else's turn to force you to rely on him? He also makes decisions for you without permission. If the protagonist does not clean up, he cannot be justified and convinced. This can be regarded as a small poisonous point, but it is not a big problem. Overall, it is very good.
"The anchor weighs a hundred pounds? How can a fishman lift it?" Is this what someone in One Piece can say? Murlocs are ten times more powerful than humans. Your words are equivalent to exclaiming in reality, "Wow, how can you, a strong man, move a bucket of water?"
Totally **, I have written more than 15 chapters to beat one person, and I will give you credit for writing thousands of chapters for one fight.
To be honest, the Ultimate Body can already overwhelm pirates.
The ultimate seadramon. Only equivalent to an ordinary naval admiral?
Isn't it summoning marine creatures from all over the world? At first glance, they are all Digimon.
Can't all Digimon talk?? In his early childhood, Du Meng was not a Pokémon. . .
Summon: Leviathan, pig's foot's mount. Ancient Mermaidmon and Neptunemon can now be summoned. . . . Need strong subordinates
Author, please stop writing about battles. It's too watery and has no passion at all.