Philosophers and Their Empire Wooden Psalms

What I wrote was a semi-fantasy work that was both realistic and imaginative, written as I pleased. Regarding the history, humanities, religion, and culture of West Asia, it also contains the astrology theory of the Western world, the Chinese Five Elements Bagua, Four Pillars and Eight Characters theory, etc. Many contents are written based on one's own imagination, which is different from official history and biography. If there is something wrong, please help me correct it. After all, it is my first time to write a book and I still don't understand many rules. This novel and its characters are purely fictitious. Any similarity is purely coincidental and should not be imitated.