
My Understanding Is Incredible, I Built a Floating City in Hogwarts
悟性逆天,我在霍格沃茨建浮空城
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I don't quite understand the protagonist's inner journey. An ordinary person in his previous life was not an elite or a politician. After traveling to the HP world, he became an orphan with the memories of his previous life. Before entering school, he was still thinking about his future livelihood. As soon as he came into contact with magic, he wanted to change the world. Where did you get such ambition? Even if you have ambitions, why change the world? Logically speaking, shouldn't we focus on magic when we come into contact with this novel and extraordinary power? What sense of belonging can the protagonist, a time-traveling orphan, have to this world? Even the bonds with other people were only formed after enrolling in school. They were still deliberate relationships, not even real bonds. You still want to contribute to the world but you can't figure out what the protagonist's starting point is? It doesn't seem like the world will affect the protagonist's quality of life, right? In the extraordinary world, as long as the protagonist is strong enough, the world will run around him, so what does it matter if the world is beautiful or not?
What about the feeling of pleasure? I've read more than 20 chapters, and I don't feel any pleasure at all. It's so boring to read like this.
Can you, don't teach spells to anyone you meet? If someone says they want to learn, teach them. It will make you look very mean, just like licking*! In the real world, if you meet someone and ask you for money, do you just give it to them? It's an equivalent exchange, so you have to pay a price. . It seems you are worthless. It can't be substituted at all!
The plot is already a bit boring, but you still want to add a Mijia game into it
Putting Muggles and purebloods together is called equal rights. But when you put house elves, centaurs, Muggles and purebloods together, it really sounds like a bit of a fool's errand. With this thing, you can show kindness, sympathize with the elves, or help improve the treatment of the elves, just like a normal animal protection association. But you can't use political struggle or even a bit of revolution to solve this problem, because in the final analysis, they are two species, and you can't really treat them equally. As a human being, you have to put people first. Just like when you see someone abusing a dog or cat, normal people will feel uncomfortable and can condemn or stop him. This is normal. But would you ask someone to give up their seat to a dog because there is no room on the bus? It was just a little girl who had good intentions, but it turned out that you, the protagonist, taught you that you actually want people and animals to have equal rights?
Can you imagine that you saved someone, but that person shamelessly asked you to teach her all your own magic? Is this a plot that people can come up with?
As title. Where is the floating city? More than two hundred chapters, where is your floating city?
At the beginning, I could still comprehend new things, but now it's over. I can't comprehend anything new in several chapters. Moreover, the things I comprehended through this comprehension are not based on my own ideas, but are all things from other systems. I feel that the protagonist's comprehension is more like a system. There is no comprehension at all. It is a cheating operation, and it is also a nanny novel. It seems that I will not be able to write without Harry.
Isn't this supposed to accept wives?
The previous book was a natural progression from chapter 100 to 100, but this one is full of bugs and minor flaws. Before it reaches 100 chapters, you repeat your ridiculous ideals over and over again, trying to increase your strength. What's the point of having lofty ideals? The settings of Goldfinger are also very confusing, and I don't know how to understand them. It's basically a sign-in system that works sometimes and sometimes doesn't work.
Starting from the 500th chapter, the situation is pitiful. The protagonist often does not appear in two or three chapters or even four or five chapters. The main plot is not advanced at all, and there is no trace of the floating city.
The switching between worlds is inexplicable, and the plot of World of Warcraft is generally written as the original plot with little change.
I have no interest in watching Warcraft. Really, although the author recycles the foreshadowing and fills in the pits, the highlight of this book is the floating city. When I saw the floating city in Chapter **2, there was no trace of the floating city. Don't let the deus ex machina appear after the return of Warcraft. It's really unnecessary. Moreover, the pace of this book is a bit poor. Lao Deng's role is not only his magic, but also the connections accumulated over decades. Even if the original idea of Lao Deng is useless at all, but facing the protagonist of a supermodel, I think the author should consider the situation where Lao Deng brings in reinforcements and at least the old lover can be fished out to show off. By the first chapter of the book, he is already invincible under Lao Deng. Without upgrading the supporting characters, the protagonist can really flip the table and create a spectacle. The current situation clearly shows that the author is slowing down the pace. The arcane framework has been set up and the people are there, but he is not creating a spectacle to prepare for the end. This book is called Hogwarts to create a spectacle. It is not about an alien mage picking up girls and overthrowing the wizarding world. I have to say that the point I am complaining about is that the author really lost touch with his understanding. When it was published, there were no plug-ins. The title of this book with incredible understanding can really be removed.
The writing of Warcraft is really mediocre. I feel like the protagonist just follows the plot and nothing changes. It's not like there's so much preparation for accepting an elf. The protagonist's strength hasn't improved much. Can it end quickly?
Author, are you dead? There is also discrimination against Muggle wizards. What is Hermione's status now? She is an intellectual executive and the protagonist is covering her up. Who dares to discriminate against her? Does this association you write have any significance for the protagonist to build a floating city? Quidditch at least still has a reputation. What is your purpose of rescuing the elves? Show your sympathy? Labor is still needed, but you said it yourself and there is a golem, so I feel it is completely unnecessary.
Don't write Hermione, Harry and Ron too close to each other, they look very licky!
Chapter 20**, the protagonist works hard to pay off his debts, and his slightly calm character collapses. Just say: Miss Granger, the magic world is all about equal exchange. What can you bring to me? I'm not looking down on you. I told you to keep a distance and waited for two or three years before taking advantage of it. But you said, "I'm glad someone learns my magic. It's outrageous. Why didn't you say I'm glad you made me greener?" In a word, the nanny and the warm man are on the same table!
Huang Yueying is blond, blue-eyed, wheat-skinned, and an international beauty. Zhuge Liang has foresight.
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