Anime Crossover: In Type-Moon, Jeanne d'Arc Comes to Me from the Start

I gave you an ancient one template at the beginning, but in the end it was too weak. The protagonist is cowardly, the character design is broken, and the dialogue is awkward. If you write a book like this, I suggest you not publish it in Feilu.

The protagonist, who possesses the template of the Ancient One who is powerful in the universe and protects the earth from being invaded by the demons of latitude, actually thinks that he cannot defeat a mere ordinary person who is not even second-rate in the moon. I suggest you find a place to hang the southeast branches yourself.

Gu Yi is such a strong person. Even in the movie version, he can't just protect himself or use teleportation to protect himself, right? How could the author think of writing the protagonist in such a bad way? The main character is the original sin. This is really unacceptable.

Don't be cautious. Caution in Feilu means cowardice.

Um, you forcefully weakened the protagonist, right? After using Gu Yi's template, who else but the ones on the ceiling would deliver food in a small place like Xingyue? But the protagonist is still the same as Naotan

Is the protagonist still cautious? I'm a coward in Feilu. After reading the first few chapters, I was immediately poisoned. What are you trying to tell me about how the movie universe is so bad? I can only say, ah, right, right, you, Ancient One, who has been guarding the earth in the hands of the devil for so many years, are so bad? No knowledge at all? Is there a possibility that the magic power is borrowed and most of the magic was developed by Ancient One himself?

Your ancient one template is too ****. It's not popular to suppress Qu Wen in Feilu. I was deceived by the introduction. Alas.

Why does this protagonist reveal the temperament of a diaosi?

I don't understand why Gu Yi was written in such a bad way? Really don't understand. Even if you write about an unknown mage, I won't say anything about you. Just write about an unknown mage named Kama Taj, and I won't say anything to you. You **write about Gu Yi, you write like a noob, I don't understand. Gu Yi borrowed a lot of debt in the original world, and the opponent he faced was an opponent like the Demon God of the ** dimension. As a result, I came to your Star-Moon World to fight the Fourth Holy Grail War, and the fight was so timid that I really can't understand it. I ** don't understand. You ** were a master on the same level as Odin in the original world, but what you ** write here is like a noob. I just don't understand. Like the world champion fighting downstairs. I really don't understand how people who play in community entertainment games are so timid.

Can the author explain this? Why is the Ancient One so weak? Have you used other abilities? Sorry, if you are not familiar with it, can you change it to another template?