Game Invasion: I Awakened the Godslayer System

I don't usually write comments, but after seeing the author's replies, I'll give my own opinion. My impression after reading it so far, the first point is that there are too many brave people. Of course I can understand that this is just a book, but the so-called fear of death so fighting monsters is actually impossible. In fact, 99% of people will vomit and become dizzy when seeing a large amount of blood for the first time. This is controlled by the nervous system. What I am talking about is reality, not pictures or videos. The second point is that the protagonist's personality is relatively self-interested and cold, which is good, but if the later part is about helping others too much, he will definitely be criticized for being inconsistent with the previous part. This is Feilu's characteristic. So it depends on the author's own writing skills. The third point is that the protagonist's strong move is very slow, whether it is skills or anything else, he feels weak. That is to say, it seems to be a development flow, but it is impossible for Feilu to make you a development flow. If you write slowly, and it is a novel about killing monsters and upgrading, it will definitely lose popularity easily. And this topic is very interesting. If you talk about the God-killing system, it will be easy to attract people. But when you come in and see that you are a development stream, you will be scolded easily. Even if it's a map-changing Feilu novel, it must be a map-changing novel all the way. And the essence is that the author is just a newcomer, and no one will have the patience to wait for you to write to the end. Secondly, if you feel that subscribing is not feasible after it is put on the shelves, it is better to open it again with the same name. Of course, this is your decision. That's about it, I mentioned it wherever I thought.

The book is good but there is a problem with the setting. Just take advantage of this job transfer to strengthen and explode. The most important point is to kill the gods. How can the gods be killed? The weaknesses were fine before the transfer. Now if they don't strengthen and explode, why should they rely on Li Yang, Xue and Duo to form a team? No. 1 In the world, the only supreme profession, plus the system, the current performance is only slightly better than the first echelon, not crushing it at all.

The protagonist must be such a weakling

This protagonist is so weak, his skills have been cooled down for so long, and the protagonist's golden finger is so useless! A copy of this design. Anyway, once the dungeon is opened, ordinary people in it will die. It's really unreasonable, and the whole world will die anyway.

The villain is poorly portrayed, the protagonist always refuses to kill or say anything, and he is extremely brainless.

After changing several versions of the settings, they were all deleted. It occurred to me a few days ago that I didn't originally set a value. So I decided to simply change the cooldown and percentage damage. The main outline has not changed. I polished the outline for a long time before starting the book. I hope you enjoy watching.

It's the author's first time writing a book. The writing feels too tender, mainly in the dialogue, which is a bit dry.

It feels wrong. It feels so strange to me. Have I installed the wrong software? It's Feilu

At first, I thought the protagonist's cooldown design was the same, until I saw Tang Duo's skill, a skill with a 10-second cooldown, and a skill that does damage with a cooldown of more than an hour. I guessed that the author's design was to suppress the growth of the protagonist, but this kind of suppression is actually meaningless.

Is our world a game?