
Anime Apocalypse: From the Start, I Team Up with Kasumigaoka Utaha
综漫末日,开局组队霞诗羽
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 59k Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
39Chapters
1.1MReads
11.4kFlowers
10.0Score
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Reader comments 34
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Also deleted the comment, the heroine's mother got the first blood, was it the hero who got it? But you took it and ran away, and the heroine's mother married someone else according to the original plot? The composition of this book seems a bit complicated. Is it a takeover or a gift?
This book is extremely poisonous. Immediately pour poison at the beginning
Let's talk about the lack of energy. You are not a student but an uncle. It's hard for others to take your place. You say you feel like an uncle. .
This protagonist is such a scumbag. He has abandoned others for more than 10 years and still wants others to wait for you wholeheartedly.
This setting problem is a bit bigger. Why not just not write it or downplay it? If you write it hard, I'm afraid your book will collapse. I have thought about the general idea. You can only consider adoption. It is unlikely that the daughter will really become the protagonist in one fell swoop. In this case, Fei Lu can let you go? Most readers would not be able to accept this, so the word "nurturing" should probably be added to this daughter.
There is something wrong with the first one! In order not to affect the birth of future heroines? Choose to leave? Mothers have to be fucked by others, right? Don't tell me that I'm imagining things! You wrote this yourself, okay? What hook script? Don't tell me to look behind! The first one made me so tired that I cuckolded
If the author really wanted to adopt a wife and a daughter, wouldn't it be better to just write about adoption? Or maybe the heroine is the daughter of the wife's sister, and then the sister and her husband died in a car accident, wouldn't it be okay to be fostered by her? There are so many excuses
All I can say is that some of the heroines who are not easy to appear should not appear. There is a real problem with turning into daughters. If the author really intends for some of the heroines to become daughters, then just comment directly. There is no need for me to linger. There is no need to force qcqs when writing a comprehensive comic about the apocalypse. If you want to write about mom, you can downplay it.
Could it be that he is eating a lollipop?
I think it is suitable for the author to write in 01 year 01 dream, that place is much more exciting than this.