Dream of the Red Chamber: Wish Bounties, Xichun Rides a Horse from the Start

If you put aside the identity setting, the behavior of the protagonist is not as good as that of some traditional good-for-nothing counterattack novels. In Feilu, other Red Mansion fan fiction protagonists have a title, and they may dare to challenge the Rongguo Mansion and separate the family. After reading the author's reply comments, I really don't like some of the settings. The protagonist's small family mentality is too obvious, and his cleverness is useless in the right place. Shi Xiangyun finished It's all a magic change. The daughter-in-law has no etiquette and rules, just like a wild girl from the country, and there is really no obvious emotional description in the book. She is just like a bystander. In short, the protagonist has no bloody courage. Forget it, I had expectations before. After reading the reply setting, I am very disappointed. **, This kind of writing setting, in Feilu, I don't want to spend money to subscribe, Jianghu**

It wouldn't make much sense if this style continued before it was put on the shelves. The soul of modern people has always been humble and petty. I know clearly all the characters and current affairs in the Red Mansion, but I feel that I am being looked down upon for being cautious in front of Rongfu and Wang Ziteng. Anyway, I can't describe the kind of depression and aggrieved...

It is true that there are many problems. The protagonist is obviously cheating, and he is the kind of person who can escape from the world, but you just want to write about how he keeps a low profile, how he integrates with the nobles, and how he shows his loyalty to the emperor. The character and temperament shown in his actions along the way are too ordinary. To use his book friend's comments, he is too petty. Everyone can control the protagonist in Rongguo Mansion. Yuanchun said that he wanted to be a concubine, and the Rongguo Mansion family came to let the protagonist make suggestions. Baba just stuck in to help. Although he knew that you were for They got attribute points, but their performance was nothing. If you put away the attribute points, you can see that the Rongguo Mansion didn't pay anything. It was all thanks to the protagonist's efforts that they got such a big benefit. They didn't even know how to thank them. Later, they wanted to build a Grand View Garden, and Baba ran to the protagonist to ask for money. The protagonist said that he would give it to him anyway. Going south to the south of the Yangtze River, facing the Shi family and the Jia family in Jinling, I always felt that I was being led along everywhere. I had to be told everything by others, and I didn't understand anything. . .

What does it mean to justify one's story, to avoid cheating, but to suppress the protagonist with all one's strength? This is called justifying one's story? The foreshadowing is secretly cool? If you follow the "me alone" style, it must be a cool article like Long Aotian's? Your idea is indeed a bit pretentious. Either don't give such a golden finger in the first place. If you give such a golden finger, you will write about intrigues, worldly relations, and the rise and fall of the family. You. . . I don't even know what to say. It's not that you can't write it, but you can't write it in the main position. It's like a person who clearly wants to be invincible and possess everything as long as he lies dormant for a period of time, but you just let him take risks, work for the emperor, and frighten him to obtain these things. In the process, he is plotted, used as a pawn, manipulated, and pointed at. Who would feel good about it? The emperor set up a trap to temper the protagonist. To put it bluntly, the protagonist will become a god in the future. You, the emperor, will be a cup of loess by then, so what qualifications do you have to point fingers?

The eldest lady Shi Xiangyun didn't stay well behind the scenes and always wandered around in front of outsiders. This was in ancient times, not modern times. When the protagonist is talking to others, she always interrupts and moves things around. It's not hers, so what does she want to do? . . If it continues like this later, you don't need to look at it, you can run away.

I have completely read all the chapters. Well, the more I read, the more I feel that my previous comments are completely correct. Your writing makes me more and more speechless. . . The protagonist holds the script of becoming an immortal and becoming an ancestor. The most important thing to do is to develop in a low-key manner and silently accumulate attribute points. There is no need to wait until he becomes an immortal. Once the attribute points are high, everything will come naturally, and others will rush to fawn over him. The kind where even the emperor has to kowtow in front of you, respect the immortal master, and seek immortality, but you just want to write that he is involved in a lot of nonsense, such as the emperor, the present, the Rongning Second Mansion, the Honorable Group, and the Yangzhou Salt Affairs. . . Holding the script of "On My Own Method" and "Invincible Flow", doing the work of historical literature, Now this so-called golden finger is called a wish bounty at best, or a nanny task list at worst. The protagonist looks like a nanny. . .

There is no sense of immersion, similar to a spectator perspective

I've finished reading it, and it's okay. So far, there are no bad points. Just don't mess with the cp. The last book had a drama between Xue Pan and the princess, which made people uncomfortable. This time, don't mess with it. The priorities should be distinguished, and the main character should be the main character. By the way, who are you going to write about as the heroine? Now Qin Keqing is the head wife. Well, Dai Chai is a must when writing in Feilu. Wang Xifeng, judging from your plot, it should be the same. As the protagonist, Sanchun is not easy to deal with. Li Wan is married and Jia Yuanchun is the concubine. Miaoyu, Shi Xiangyun, Baoqin, the You sisters, etc. Did not appear. Seeing that you mentioned Shi Xiangyun's wish in your profile, together with Brother Ai, well, you're not going to pull CP again and give Shi Xiangyun to Baoyu? I can guarantee that if you dare to write like this, this book will make the same mistake as the last one.

No updates for a day? I see that your chapter names are updated six times a day? It won't be scheduled or six chapters will be updated at once, right? Here in Feilu, new books seem to be exposed in the update list in the early stage. If you set a timer, the update list will not be refreshed. If updates are crowded together, the exposure rate will be squeezed. It is best to update in separate time periods, otherwise you will suffer too much. If you don't believe it, try it and update it separately. The daily collection should increase to a certain extent.

In my personal opinion, the character of Shi Xiangyun in this book is a little too out of the ordinary. Not only does she have no etiquette, but she is also written to be so smart and witty. It is completely divorced from the original work. The author has created a brand new Shi Xiangyun, which is really awkward.