Starting From Zero: I Force a Kiss on Beatrice From the Start!

It's sad that there aren't any good books to read, and this book feels a bit like a boiling sheep. It's not very enjoyable to read, but aside from this, it's still a fairly readable novel.

Regarding Priscilla, if you are writing as the heroine, can you control your words and actions? She behaves like a gangster lesbian towards other future heroines. Don't tell me you want to have a sex scene between the heroines in the future. Then the protagonist was watching the show like a green turtle, and he had to sigh, "The lilies are blooming so beautifully."

The writing is not bad, and some minor flaws are not serious flaws. Why do you just hold on to them? You have to force all those who write variety comics and re0 to become eunuchs, right? In the past few years, all the writers who have been able to write are cuckold authors, because they have a good mentality and write books just to seduce people. The remaining good authors are all forced to ** by you **Sabi! It's been two years since I've seen any interesting fan fiction. I beg you to please just be human!

The first time I saw it, it was a forced kiss on Qiao Biluo.

When I read Chapter 35, I saw the protagonist trying hard for a kiss, but ended up kissing a village girl in the blink of an eye. I don't know about others, but I couldn't stand it anyway. I'm fucked. Come on, author.

Originally, I was raising books, but now that something like this has happened, it's normal to change the setting of the fan fiction. Since you have changed the Mule and Ram to mend demons, why can't you change it to Ram's gratitude to the Mule? Doesn't the setting of Ram having a mule depress some readers? Also, after reading the comments, it turns out that Curxiu also has a setting that he likes, and he doesn't plan to change it, right? Wouldn't everyone be happy if this kind of plot, which is not the main plot and makes some readers unhappy, would be changed? Not to mention that some anime fans may not know these settings at all, but you still mention them

That slave merchant sold you, but he didn't take revenge later.

Let me start by saying that it's not that I don't like the characters, and it's not that your writing is not good or inconsistent with the original work. That is to say, can we chase girls not to be like Boiling Sheep? I know it is consistent with the original work, but after all, they have bad tempers, so don't get together.

It's not that your protagonist may be someone else's slave for a long time. You also talked about how to make the data more attractive in FL. Then you should also know what FL's readers want to see, right?

Isn't she an ice attribute? Did I remember it wrong?