You and Me Beneath the Light and Shadow

1. The title of the book is not suitable. Change it so that people can see what your book is about at a glance. It will make people feel happy before reading it. For example: Entertainment: Me! Behind the scenes, he dominates the entertainment industry. 2 In the first chapter at the beginning, I don't quite understand why the protagonist's company is made into a shabby one. The protagonist himself is also slovenly. This is Feilu. You still have such a high status, so your style should be higher. 3 It's actually quite toxic for a high-status protagonist to fall in love with an actress from the entertainment industry, let alone an original heroine. Generally, they show their charm in a high profile, so that the female star will admire and like the protagonist, and the protagonist takes him into the harem with a high profile. In this process, the actress can be given affection, but the style of the protagonist cannot be downgraded. 4. It's best not to write about original female pig's feet in entertainment articles. What everyone sees in entertainment articles is the interaction with real-life female stars. It's really thankless to create your own.

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