Anime Crossover: More Children, More Blessings in the Apocalypse

I have been reviewed and sanctioned again. I am so happy, hahahaha, I can still change it! Help me up, I want to change the article, hahahaha. I was addicted to writing, and I tossed and turned in bed unable to sleep. I opened my eyes wide and slapped myself desperately to calm down, but I couldn't calm down at all. My eyes widened, and I jumped out of bed and rushed to the computer to open the word document. I couldn't stand the heat. I wanted to change the article. I wanted to change the article.

I just read the first few chapters. Is Busuda this character? Or is it just a post-apocalyptic comic-book review? Is there Shennong?

Hey, why do you all like to smoke?

Author, are you sure you are writing about Busujima Saeko and not some powerless female character in a post-apocalyptic harem? Busujima is someone who can really make a knife faster than a gun within seven steps. As for threatening her, that's even more ridiculous. Busujima has always suppressed her bloodthirsty desire. When she was in junior high school, she deliberately walked on a small road to lure gangsters to follow her, and then beat them to a disability in the name of self-defense. You can actually write a plot where the protagonist puts her into a base and then gets close to the opponent to threaten her. How many lives does your protagonist have to be cut off by Busujima?

I was wondering, are there any apocalyptic novels that have the most basic patches? For example, the system patch gives other female characters luck and talents, so that they will not be harmed in the apocalypse and take advantage. Is this better?

I feel like the writing is getting stronger. In addition, in the comprehensive comic, you don't write about the map of small life, but about Kyoto? In some depictions, the protagonist waves his hands in a hurry. Why is he in a hurry? In addition, the description of the construction of the protagonist's shelter is not very good. For example, which ring is the shelter located in and what is the flow of people? And the protagonist's parents, etc.,

As title. The description of Yako Busujima at the beginning was a bit broken. This description is more suitable for Kasumigaoka Shiha. Busujima Yako is definitely the kind of person who would rather be in pieces than in ruins.

Where is this female supporting role? The female supporting characters in Campus Apocalypse are all top-notch, why don't you write about the defeated dog Eiri-ri or something like that? The female supporting role is to play assists next to the protagonist and lower the heroine's bottom line. If the world is apocalyptic, why not write it earlier? Why not forcefully write the heroine half a year later?

I hope the strategy won't take too long. Morality is a weakness in the end of the world.

Isn't it poisonous, gentlemen? My defense is relatively low and I have negative armor.