Global: The Blacksmith, and My Daughter Secretly Plays Frostmourne

The movie about an 18-year-old girl wielding a sword has lasted more than 20 episodes. Is it a children's channel? 50,000 Words, the protagonist appears at the beginning, tell me, are you going off topic, brother?

Good! But what about my joy of fire?

The naughty kid who wrote forty-five chapters is messing around. Is this to clear the naughty kid's name?

The writing and setting description are a bit immature. Also, biological female goose? Is the heroine the beginning? , This is great. Also, are the prices realistic? It's a magical weapon, but it's only five billion? Can he create artifacts, or is he an ordinary blacksmith? Isn't this plot about letting the female goose use a magical weapon? , It is better to frame the artifact and hang it on the wall and keep it in the house. The female goose thought it looked good and wanted to show off in front of her friends, so she went to get it secretly, but it was true. There is also a part, dialogue, why not, Yuanyuan is here to fight the little monster. ~~ Hey, little monster, don't run away, come and try your grandma Yuanyuan's big sword It's better to write this. The author's dialogue, children, talking now, so much hacking and slashing? Also, how old is your daughter? Why don't you change it to six years old, just starting elementary school?

Obviously, the father's kindness and his son's filial piety stabbed the protagonist to death.

Does the author have any children? The protagonist's world seems to be in a war-torn era. Who would let their children run around alone? Let alone the city, even in modern times there are still human traffickers! Also, when the protagonist created Frostmourne, he didn't go to the auction and instead put it up for sale in the blacksmith shop? I have read so many novels that if I want to be a hermit master, I must at least be broadcast live in the Heian Era! Is there a protagonist who is reluctant to pay someone to take care of his children? Just put these 5 billion weapons in the password counter and be done with it? No padlock? I'm really speechless!!

If pig's feet don't appear in too many chapters, not many people will watch it. You don't have seven daughters who can summon dad to adventure. I can't explain the forging of pig's feet clearly, and I don't seem to have any fighting ability.

How to say it? Just fight a monster to attack the city. Why do you keep delaying the plot? It's easy to defeat monsters with Frostmourne, and you can understand all the settings. But here's the problem, Shuicheng, you're going a little too far! I guess it will be finished after it goes on sale, right?

It's just too watery, speed up the update.

Commentary on Chapter 9: Seeking the Enemy in the Void, Killing the Shadow Leopard with One Sword, "Everyone: Blacksmith, Daughter Secretly Plays with Frostmourne" written by the pure little Loach.