
Running Man: I, the Almighty Warrior, Stunned Bai Lu
跑男:我,全能战士,惊呆白露
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 212k Words
- Genre
- Urban Romance
- Subgenre
- Urban Life
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Faloo
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2.1MReads
6.5kFlowers
10.0 · 303Score
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Here's a suggestion: Don't just add a colon after the character's name and start talking nonsense, it's too flat. Characters must have actions and emotions to stand up. For example, the most boring dialogue" Zheng Kai: "Brother... Brother, wait a minute! Give me a chance to meet you for the first time! "This kind of dialogue is too dull. But it's different if you add the characters' emotions and actions. For example: Zheng Kai was pinned to the ground and struggled fiercely. The intense resistance consumed so much energy that he began to pant violently. After struggling to no avail, he began to beg for mercy: "Brother... Brother, wait a minute! Give me a chance to meet you for the first time! " Emotions, actions, and dialogues will make the characters more three-dimensional. Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it
Because there is too little suspense and the protagonists are sure to win in the confrontation, the ratings of this show will drop within a few episodes.
Write more stories about RM. RM 15 years ago was really like a god. The global travel special in 2017-18 can also be copied, which is also very interesting.
Ah? When you were a kid, didn't September like October?
Sha Yi appeared just after the first episode of the first season was aired? Before the show even started, we already knew that there was a title of "Little Cheetah King"? To write a fanfic, you have to read the original version at least once~
I don't understand why there are Deng Chao, Chen He and others. I know they are old MCs, but no matter how good they are, I don't think they are good now.
About "Running Man: I, the Almighty Warrior, Stunned Bailu" written by the Red Nose Era 42 Mu Shuiqin inhaled European energy wildly, and Chen Chichi went berserk! Chapter review.
About "Running Man: I, the Almighty Warrior, Stunned by White Dew" written by the Red Nose Era 6. Witnessing a citizen's white dew, pat your little head with melon seeds! (New book 6/10) Chapter review.
Nutritional Sprite update, hehehehe