Hogwarts: I Only Want to Build a Magic Tower

Overall it's okay but has some flaws. Goldfinger keeps mentioning the existence of other time-travelers, which is a bit uncomfortable. The male protagonist is not the only one, although they have given the protagonist a lot of help. And it has been mentioned many times that many people are travelers from the parallel world of Harry Potter, which makes people easily think of the heroine of the parallel world? Is she also the heroine of other time travellers? So it's unpleasant and jarring. The clothing is currently impeccable, the shortest is below the knee. Just don't get sick in the future. It doesn't mean that the heroine can't wear sexier clothes. The premise is that only the hero is in a more private space. Contact: The heroines have a lot of contact with their respective fathers, a bit too much in my opinion. As for Dumbledore, the male protagonist can completely pull Hermione. After all, there is no need to pretend to be weak to please Dumbledore before he enters the academy or even gets older. He can show off with ease. It would be fine if we could also write about the heroine's family of origin in the future.

I don't see the use of this thing at all. Why do I keep thinking about it?

There are so many Feilu eunuchs!

The plot that the author wants to open has almost been opened. If any book friends have any good things that they want to give to the protagonist, you can leave a message here. As long as it is suitable, it will definitely appear in the plot.

Sorry, I can't imagine it. Can you send me a reference picture?

Personally, I quite like it, but it's a pity that I cut it.

Although I don't know how far I have written it, I support it as long as it aims at qcqs.

It's okay, it's just a colorful point in itself, but I think what we said is different. My original intention was that it was similar to time travel, Harry's mother was a different person, and Lily cut off her beard in advance, because I remember that her important plot point was because Snape hurt her by saying the wrong thing, she broke up with Snape, and then followed James. I originally thought this point could be used, but I guess I can't write that. Other than her current heroines, she can arrange it well.

It's best to set it so that all other time travelers are dead.

I am actually a layman, mainly watching movies, and I may be talking nonsense about some of the settings, because I saw some people say that Lily Evans is a character that is almost impossible to write about. After all, there are timeline issues. But since there is such a thing as a time turner, I think it is not impossible to magically change a prop or ability, but it probably needs to be laid in advance. After all, if it is really written, then in the current timeline, Lily should still be alive, or be brought from the past to the present. Someone should have said this sooner. Or I may not necessarily write it, but I really hope to see this possibility.