DanMachi: I'm a Sword Immortal in the Labyrinth City

The beginning made me feel like the protagonist was a loser. A bit poisonous

Author, are you trying to poison me to the point of vomiting me out? In the beginning of some tavern, one of his employees was molested, and the Shabi girl couldn't come out. Then the male protagonist beat the teasing person to drive him away, and those few females came out. In the end, the troublemakers were taken away with their money, and the male protagonist was blackmailed for one million. This is a work that a damn person could write, that After being teased, Shabi even said that the male protagonist shouldn't take action. Haha, I laughed so hard. He acted bravely and was told that he shouldn't have taken action. He was blackmailed with 1 million, and then he was given a thumbs down by the Nabi woman. As a result, the male protagonist was promoted. He even thanked her and rushed to wash the dishes to pay off the debt. I laughed so hard! Finally, a Sabi woman came out of nowhere and asked the protagonist to teach me swordsmanship. You should at least pay some price. But in the end, you didn't get anything. The male protagonist even taught you swordsmanship. To be honest, those who watched this anime before didn't think this Sabi woman was interesting. Zaizhong, do you dare to write it down at the ** point?

I don't understand what the characteristics of the protagonist mean. Many of them overlap with Bell's character? Will Bell still have a threesome together after he has sex with Hestia? I read a book in Ciwei. Lily set her target on the protagonist, but the protagonist ignored her and continued to steal. At that time, the protagonist killed her directly. Why are you all such a bitch? No matter how miserable her past was, what about the other people she framed? I hate this kind of Holy Mother who looks like Luffy the most. She is so evil!

Is the protagonist's head filled with semen? Being cheated and looked down upon. As long as it's a woman, I'll forgive you. It's really funny to watch

How can I put it this way? At the beginning, I felt like the protagonist was like a loser. His head was full of colors. When he went down to the dungeon, he became like a late-stage chuunibyou. I felt that the protagonist you wrote was so embarrassed when he said that line. My back felt a little numb when I heard it. It was embarrassing.

I feel that the protagonist is too stupid, and I feel very useless, and I don't know what to think in my head. I don't see much about IQ or anything like that. This kind of character really makes people unhappy, and there is no growth. I'll just moisten it first.

I*, what kind of novel is this? Is the protagonist a monkey in heat? It's like I've never seen women before. Even if they are very good-looking, they shouldn't be so seductive.

It is very unpleasant to write the protagonist as a disabled person who only has lust in his mind and has no self-awareness. Not as good as the young male protagonist who only knows how to wash his hands. No matter how strong the protagonist is, he still feels cheap. Just a deceitful flower picker.

Good news, anyone can write a novel. Bad news, anyone can write a novel.

The protagonist has the same lack of self-awareness as Natsuki Subaru in the early stage and completely puts Seese first. It's not that I don't like SP-type protagonists, but if you don't have any strength and want to date the original female character, what will the consequences be besides humiliating yourself? Is the character of the protagonist really suitable for practicing Taixu sword energy?