American Comics: Playing Young Flash from the Start

Let me give you a piece of advice. Many worlds can be mixed, but the mixing of Marvel and DC is the most chaotic. Many settings conflict, such as God. There are several versions in Marvel. Remember, the strongest version is the multi-level, and the worse version is the mutant Apocalypse. But God in DC is on the same level as Marvel's OAA or TOAA. Marvel Angel is like that and has several versions, but DC Angel is a top-level combat force. For example, the gods in Marvel mythology are aliens, but DC's are real gods.

Author, Youshan rarely uses 'this king' as the subject, right? Why don't you go back to Jia and have a look?

The subject matter is not bad, but the writing is poor. The author seems to like to go here and there, always breaking a small plot into several paragraphs, which makes it very confusing to intersperse it here and there. Moreover, the description of the audience's reaction to the appearance of the heroic spirit is also very poor. The heroic spirit appears and fights, and the audience sees it, but how does the author describe it? The light discussion is gone in a few sentences, can't you describe it in more depth? Let them discover the history of Heroic Spirits and marvel at the setting of Heroic Spirits. There are also a lot of words about the introduction of the Heroic Spirits' Noble Phantasms and Skills. Often when this kind of introduction appears, more than 60% of the words are taken up by the introduction. It looks like a running account. The author is definitely a newcomer with poor writing skills.

The subject matter is okay, the content is a bit poor, and the writing is slightly poor. It is not good if you play it all by yourself. It is better to use the ability of one or more heroic spirits, but the summoned heroic spirit is better. It is not interesting to play the protagonist alone, and it is not clear which heroic spirit is the main character in the main line. It is very interesting to write here and there, just my personal opinion.

Characters always have selective amnesia. One moment they know the plot and the next they don't, and they are inconsistent.

I looked at this and it's not the first time this author has written a book. How can he still be so messed up? The heroic spirit uses the protagonist's name to talk to others, and then uses the heroic spirit's name to talk to others. It goes back and forth.

Every character has an appearance setting. It's so tiring to watch.

Big sister, uncle, why don't you call me GEIGEI?

The situation was so bad that Dayu needed to step forward.

He is the oldest hero king