American Comics: Playing the Role of Xiao Shining in the Beginning

The subject matter is not bad, but the writing is poor. The author seems to like to go here and there, always breaking a small plot into several paragraphs, which makes it very confusing to intersperse it here and there. Moreover, the description of the audience's reaction to the appearance of the heroic spirit is also very poor. The heroic spirit appears and fights, and the audience sees it, but how does the author describe it? The light discussion is gone in a few sentences, can't you describe it in more depth? Let them discover the history of Heroic Spirits and marvel at the setting of Heroic Spirits. There are also a lot of words about the introduction of the Heroic Spirits' Noble Phantasms and Skills. Often when this kind of introduction appears, more than 60% of the words are taken up by the introduction. It looks like a running account. The author is definitely a newcomer with poor writing skills.

I started writing it from Chapter 210,

You can fly and search for "Pure Water Elves Will Destroy Humanity in Teyvat" Fontaine's first water goddess Egoria turned pure water elves into humans, but their essence is completely different from humans. They are essentially water people. If a waterman marries a human, there is no way to produce offspring. Man + woman = human being water man + water woman = water man Man + Water Woman = Water Man Water man + woman = no offspring The Nectar Spring allows other pure water elves to be reincarnated into water people and babies are born into the world. This operation is similar to Taiz Yuros turning human love crystals into bugs, and at the same time, parents treat the bugs as their own children. If Agolia does not die, will people in any country have to worship her in a thousand years to reproduce? God loves the world, and pure water elves wearing human skin are also human beings. If the people of Fontaine do not die, the humans of Teyvat will perish.

I just reply when I see a post, I learned it from a big brother by gaining experience in manually copying and pasting. I didn't understand it before, so I never looked back after reading. I haven't been able to level up and gain experience, and now I understand. Anyway, I can level up by replying and earn experience. Upgrading requires experience, so I copied this sentence.

The level of thinking is still at the level of a primary school student. One after another, they scold others for being unpatriotic, and others scold them for being patriotic. In order to offend them, you ask them how patriotic they are, and ask them what awards they have won for the country and how much money they have donated. What others originally meant was that even though they haven't done much for the country, how can a bunch of idiots stand on a high moral ground and kidnap others and accuse them of being unpatriotic? Do they deserve it? Before asking others whether they are patriotic or what they have done for the country, is it okay to first clarify what others want to express? Otherwise you will make me think that you are really just a primary school student here to clean up this **** Naocan.

The subject matter is good, but licking the Sharingan all the time is very offensive.

It's so confusing, and I get stuck every time I return to a critical moment. Can I write it? If you can't write, get out

If a method of cultivating Yin Escape chakra can be developed, there will be no risk of blindness in the kaleidoscope, and the blood line is ultimately a kind of chakra inheritance. Otherwise, Kakashi would not have the chance to experience Obito's large twin gods in the fourth battle. The reason why Uchiha needs a close relative's kaleidoscope to upgrade to the eternal kaleidoscope is simply that there is no Is there a way to practice Yin Escape Chakra to replenish the pupil power and complete the qualitative change? Therefore, we can only rely on changing eyes to merge the two similar pupil powers to complete the qualitative change and then passively increase the amount of Yin Escape Chakra. Forget it like Indra. As the ancestor of Uchiha, the existence closest to the Six Paths and Ten Tails, there is a lot of Yin Escape Chakra awakened in the blood.

Halfway through writing the Marvel plot, I started writing about DC. It was so confusing.

I once admired three men, one was Xu Xian, the other was Dong Yong, the third was Ning Caichen, one dared to be a snake, one dared to be an immortal, and the last one was not even a ghost. Only after watching Hua Qiangu did I realize that Luo Shi is a real man who dares to fuck a caterpillar. I despise Sun Wukong the most. After he immobilized the seven fairies, he went to steal peaches, but I have to admire Sun Wukong's father. I'm so drunk that I can actually get pregnant with stones. Some people say that I have water experience, and I slap them in the face. Are you talking nonsense? I didn't know how to upgrade without water before. Now I understand. . Anyway, a 50-word sticker can be upgraded. You can also earn experience. Upgrading requires experience, so I copied this sentence. Reply when you encounter a post, and leave when you're done with it.

Everything is legal, how can it be illegal?

If Marvel and DC are released on the shelves, it will be too funny to follow, or it will be a waste of time.

The protagonist appears a few times, is divided into countless pieces, and exits gloriously.

Can you transform into a phoenix if you get the knight's breath? ? You want to eat shit! Without Hikari's light turning into a hammer, come on, the breath can just turn into the hero form! Still in phoenix form? Idiot!

First of all, if Marvel and DC go back to the past in the future, it will only create a parallel world, otherwise there will not be so many tragedies, and the protagonist has to travel back to the past in the future, which is a very bad way of writing.

Finally another book that suits my appetite

At least I finally got the character of Youshan right, and Chef Yue shed tears

Well, the author who has been writing has actually forgotten the role of his protagonist

Forty-four was eaten? Even if it is disconnected, there is no way to see it.

This novel is great, the plot is very good, and the writing is also great. Unfortunately, I was very frightened when I read it because the author didn't give a definite answer and I felt like I would get mad at any time. I hope the author will be more serious and treat us true fans well.

Come on, it's the narrow-eyed Asian-American Liu Qianmeizi, a small-professed chess girl, or the goddaughter of Chen Jinfei of the Small Animal Protection Association, the dejected Bai Kefei Cauliflower who came out of Hollywood? Its fans are extremely pure

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Author, you can't add the three words (enhanced version) after each heroic spirit, or add the three words (enhanced version) after the system. The heroic spirits are very strong, but the strongest is not the Heavenly Father (exploding star). There are also single target, multi-dimensional, and omnipotent. Any one of them can kill the protagonist and the heroic spirit with one slap.

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