Death: Sign in to the Invisible Empire at the Beginning

I think it depends on how the plot of pretending to be a slap in the face is arranged. The slap in the face of a good book is well planned, the foreshadowing is subtle, the plot is clearly arranged, and the desire to exalt before suppressing is just right. When the plot reaches its climax, the feeling of pleasure can be felt from the hair to the toes. A bad book is a slap in the face, with no foreshadowing, just like the protagonist is walking well on the road, and suddenly a villain jumps out to target the protagonist, for no reason or for an outrageous reason. Do you think readers will be happy with this kind of plot? In fact, the reader is so embarrassed that he pulls out two rooms and one living room with his toes This book is the latter. In the second chapter, I can't wait to start the plot of pretending to be a slap in the face. I am so anxious that it's like the third chapter is about to end. I really sincerely ask the author, don't you really feel comfortable writing like this? Don't you really feel embarrassed?

I still want to complain. Firstly, Goldfinger will become weaker. Secondly, the protagonist transforms into Mori and sleeps with Akemi. People always thought it was Kogoro who was with her. Thirdly, I insist on writing that Conan comes to live in my house. I really don't understand it.

I'll look at it again in a few days. If it doesn't change, I won't read it. Anyway, I won't read the next one if I don't change it.

This kind of stupid setting is also a live broadcast of tomb robbing.

One thing to say, the protagonist's behavior is really disappointing. Standing still at every turn, the fourth dimension is active. To put it bluntly, he is really stupid. As long as you meet new people and things, your mind will become empty. If you have any ideas, shouldn't you think about them only when the time is right? What kind of protagonist is really a template from decades ago. I was stunned at every turn. The key point was that signing in was also interesting, and you had to stand still for ten seconds. As for the protagonist, he likes to stand still at certain times, waiting for others to provoke him. There is also a protagonist who is ridiculed at every turn, and then reversed and slapped in the face. It's really a routine. I really didn't see any fluctuations at all, and I still found it funny. It was okay once or twice. Author, you were slapped in the face both times you signed in. Don't you think you are being extra special?

The first two chapters of Silly Poison were so poisonous that I had to write a silly thing to ridicule it, right?

Not to mention the issue of emergency launch of satellite reserves, fighter jets have been seen cruising across the 38th parallel, and the architectural style can't be seen? Is it possible that buildings from a hundred years ago and a hundred years from now will be the same? And if it is covered through travel, it turns out that the loss of contact in the concession is also a problem.

The author is dead and the paper is being burned.

The author repeated it and revised it.

The identity of the protagonist is not going to be revealed, right? Can we wait until the thousand-year bloody battle to reveal it again? This would be more interesting. How will Soul Society react by then?

Drive high and go low, this book is getting boring

People don't think Bilian is a genius. Do you think it is so simple to have a 15-year gap without practicing?

I don't know if the author made a mistake or just didn't understand. Isn't reiatsu a level of power? If the power level is unlimited, wouldn't it be worse than the Spirit King? Is it because of unlimited spiritual power?

Isn't cooperating with the later Qing Dynasty seeking skin from a tiger?

Why do women help but men don't? Like a fool, you always want thousands of beauties. Aren't you afraid of weak kidneys? The mentally retarded one has been identified.

"Order is unnatural. Real nature should be in chaos." "We're not destroying the universe, we're repairing it."

Chapter 21: Strongest in strength, he wants to have sex with a woman whenever he sees one, stallion?

At 5 yuan a liter, I want to add 100-octane gasoline. Don't tell me that Wuling Light only deserves to add 92 or 9598. I don't like it, so I just add 100-octane gasoline.

Are battle patrols more powerful than battle trains?

The donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like you. As long as they are not dead, they will fight to the death.

Sky? Black Dragon Clan? Demon God Legend Black Dragon Sky, right? Fortunately, I saw a book about Black Dragon Sky some time ago. I was curious and left a review to ask what Black Dragon Sky is! If I hadn't been told by my book friends, I wouldn't have known that this was the strongest book in the Legend of Demons and Gods! The ultimate big boost level one!

Personally, I prefer this kind of subject matter. It's very refreshing and interesting to watch. Life is already so boring, so it doesn't hurt to read some novels to have fun.

Your main plot is too dense. . . The protagonist himself has no plot at all. It would be much better if he pretends to be a slap in the face and talks about love or just write about daily life. Of course, you can't write too much. It's good to write one or two chapters after a main plot.

Familiar author, familiar writing style, familiar power system

Can there be more updates?

I originally thought it was some kind of big boos behind the scenes, but it turned out to be a mess. I'm very disappointed and terrible.

It gives me a sense of soul-carrying déjà vu. It's very well written. Please keep up the good work.

Is the author still around? If you don't update, I'm afraid I'll forget what you wrote before. (;一_一)

The speed is even faster. It's so slow. Here are 10 pictures first.

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