My Childhood Sweetheart Is Wang Ying, and Xie Qiao Headbutts Me from the Start

Author, your writing style and ideas are indeed very strong and very mature. But there is something wrong with the plot. You should be a copycat. Either don't be a copycat. If you want to be a copycat, be thorough. You shouldn't have written about Jay Chou. But you did it and created some plots that required Jay Chou to arrange the music. All the good points that were foreshadowed were ruined by you. It's a good thing for the male protagonist to stand up for his friends, but he can't just be hot-headed and only hit people without considering other methods. He only hits and beats. It's too childish. If a villain with a brain takes advantage of this, the male protagonist's family can completely collapse.

The writing is so good, so many characters blend together without any sense of violation, which is really great. But the author should pay more attention, and don't join in the CP or the same month. In the future, the female protagonists will gradually form a circle with the male protagonists, while other male friends such as Yang Cheng will become smaller and form a circle. Don't hang out together. They are all men, not saints, and can easily get into trouble. The male protagonist has a harem, and the female protagonists just need to be in a circle. If you put a few young brothers into the harem group, I will be green by default. When opening a harem, avoid this booby trap.

The first is what everyone has talked about the most. Song Qian's problem is indeed included in the introduction. On the one hand, it is for the sake of popularity. On the other hand, I actually wanted to read some stallion stories without any brains. The kind of book thief who makes money, but after writing about it, I gave up on this idea. Therefore, there will be no Song Qian. There is only Pei Yin as an auntie. It was added for readers. The second issue is the rhythm. After reading the comments of Fairy Fans today, we can know what the readers mean. Indeed, the plot is a bit delayed now, because it is related to the author's own brain circuit in the early stage. I always feel that having a harem would be very abrupt if I don't make some preparations in advance, and it's not like ancient times, so I feel that if there is a bond between these girls first, then it will be more acceptable, and it should not be so abrupt. Of course, this is the author's own feeling. This book will be updated at a pace of ten updates and will be completed in September. The book will not end before October. As for when it will end later, it depends on the subsequent results. To be honest, the results of this book are really not good. A normal author should have cut it. However, I always feel that cutting some data will be sorry for readers, so I will write it until the end of September. No matter how bad the score is, I will continue writing it. As for when this book will focus on, it is college. Don't worry about high school taking up too much text and dozens of chapters. That won't happen. The only role of high school is three. The first one is to build momentum, including the college entrance examination, including some things that can be done in high school to enhance the protagonist's background. Secondly, several new female protagonists will appear, and these female protagonists are all the kind who will meet the person they like in high school. So act early and throw them out. The third is to establish friendship with the people around Yang Xiu, so that opening a harem will not be so abrupt. As for the candidates for the heroine, there are not many people set. Most of the others will be canaries, or partners with a special relationship! Okay, that's it, today is the Chinese Valentine's Day, I wish you all a happy Chinese Valentine's Day. It's time now, it's evening, let's continue coding! If you see this comment, please give it a like, at least let me know that someone understands what I mean!

Isn't it right? Nowadays, no film and television drama series featuring Qiao Yingzi is inseparable from Aunt Song? Is there such a comprehensive drama harem novel? There can be young women but no big** novels.

143 Has so many typos that Yang Cheng and Yang Xiu can't tell them apart.

Fans should not write too much about politics and business wars, otherwise it will become boring the more you read them.

When will it return to the main line and the Hong Kong line end?

Suddenly I realized that it makes sense to add Zhong Xiaoai

It's hard to imagine the protagonist coming out of the womb with consciousness.

It's well written, but it's just not enough to watch City Traces. Just City Traces. Don't use any supernatural powers later on.