Armor: I, Duan Muyan, Am Shura, the King at the Beginning!

How high is the Tao Te Ching? You have been studying it for 300 years, but your character is still the same. But you accepted it as soon as Afang Nu said it. It feels so unprincipled, and you still want to study the Dao Jing again. Why are you taking A Fang with you? After being in seclusion for hundreds of years, my bones are gone.

Could the hardware at that time keep up? I haven't even taken out my mobile phone. Well, what's the use? Even the computer hardware at that time couldn't keep up. No matter how good the software was, it was useless if the hardware couldn't keep up.

What is Duanmu Yan written about? He is a time traveler wearing Duanmu Yan skin.

Author, you should not let your personal feelings come in when you write a novel. Woah woah woah woah, woah woah woah, the person who originally lost in the fight with Yanyulou is here to say that he won. Don't talk about losing and winning people's hearts in a fight. This is usually a lazy face. If you don't speak according to the facts and have never seen the fight, it's nothing to read your novel. I have read it and feel elated.

Come on, I've read a lot about Saint Seiya. They all dare not write about other worlds because the Saints are too powerful. But it has been cut in half, because it is said to be a comprehensive comic, so you have to be a comprehensive comic. If it is not a comprehensive comic, it is equivalent to deceiving readers and attracting readers who expect anti-aircraft guns to kill mosquitoes, but it cannot deliver the goods, which will only lose more readers. On the contrary, if you write about the invincible flow of anti-aircraft guns and mosquitoes, it will be much better. But understand, like PunchMan, only part of his appeal is fun. The bigger part is character creation. The character concept is like an undocumented knight, who is not strong but can be written well, or like Saitama, who is super strong but focuses on his emotions, outlook on life, and values, so he remains firm even if he is questioned. Don't write the same work just to be satisfied, or upgrade it. There are too many, and writing like this is definitely not enough to stand out. Of course, the above are just some superficial opinions, so don't take it too seriously. Come on, take good care of you

Come on, set an example for production donkeys

The writing is too messy and too many elements have been added. The beginning was quite good.

I am the only one in heaven and earth, General Duanmu

Can there be fewer typos?

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The plot of Chapter 5 is basically the same as that of Chapter 4 of Transforming into a World-famous Goddess. I don't know who copied whom.