Adventures Starting in the Apartment

Everyone else's draws are useful, but the protagonist is the only one who draws gold. He is like a waste. He has no ability in the first place and still suppresses it like this. He is a waste.

I really don't know what's so good about Hu Yifei. She's unruly, domineering, and duplicitous. Why do so many people like her? Just because she is the heroine?

I just read the first few chapters and kept suppressing the protagonist. I have always been better than the protagonist in other people's draws. The protagonist can be as transparent as a transparent person or not. The emotional scenes are also very awkward. Why are you screening readers?

The subject matter is good, but don't always set the protagonist group to be the upper limit of that world. Once the protagonist passes, the ceiling will be turned directly into an adventure novel into a travel novel! As for the heroine, don't create a self-created and uninvolving feeling. Wanyu, Yumo, Nuolan, and Dali are all very good! PS: Don't write about games or two-dimensional dramas, just some classic movies and TV shows!

For fear of wasting your time, I will explain it in the comment section. First of all, I want to apologize to everyone, newbie, new book. ... Then there is the issue of emotional scenes. The transition is a bit abrupt. The author is single* and really did not handle this aspect well. I apologize to everyone. Then there is the issue of the female protagonist. First of all, this is a novel with multiple female protagonists. In addition to Hu Yifei, there will be other female protagonists. As for the female protagonist who everyone said does not want Hu Yifei, the author's outline and previous foreshadowing have been written here, so there is no way. The author can only promise to present a good story to everyone with his heart. If you like it, thank you for your support. If you don't like it, the author apologizes to you, maybe it's because of his lack of writing skills that he let you down. There must be something bad about a newcomer's new book, so I'm not shameless enough to ask for flowers or anything like that. Hope you enjoy watching it.

I don't know if it's the love apartment's system or the protagonist's system, but the protagonist behaves like this.

You still have blood after you come out of Biohazard, so you go straight to wash it. Isn't this a death wish? Others throw away everything before returning to Biohazard for fear of bringing the virus home. You don't think the world is chaotic enough?

Can you write about the world of Journey to the Center of the Earth or an adventure world for the protagonist group to collect pets?

It's no different from the background of the tomb robbing system in Love Apartment

It feels like a replica of the tomb robbing system, and the various plot and routine settings are similar.