Seafaring: No One Can Hide My Immortal Qin Empire

Xiang Yu can't defeat Garp, he is too weak, and the protagonist and the protagonist's power are not that strong, and they are not qualified to compete with the world government.

If you don't have that level, don't squeeze in. People who haven't graduated from elementary school still dare to write novels. Did Liang Jingru give you the courage?

Da Qin and the other party don't share the same world view, so how do they share the same language? Garp comes into contact with Zhuxia for the first time. Will he not be shocked when he sees the magnificent palaces of the Qin Empire, the buildings where Qin people live, the huge houses, and the Zhuxia civilization that is completely different from the pirate worldview? Most of the kingdoms in the pirate world are based on the slave kingdoms of medieval Europe. Is there such a lineage of Zhengshuo Shangguo? Not counting the Kingdom of Wano, the four images that are a mixture of the Asuka Era and the Heian Era simply do not have the majesty of Shoshuo.

Xiang Yu has to wear gloves when he hits people. The gloves create a little bully. Xiang Yu is the bully himself. He cherishes a little bully so much. He has to take medicine to fight a kapu. People will recover after resting. If you make a medicine bully, your character will be gone all of a sudden.

I am speechless. Even if the emperor is the strongest, if he is attacked by an outsider, there are so many people with no one to protect him. Are they all just free food? If he comes from the countryside and doesn't understand anything, it would be reasonable.

You seem to be very conflicted. You wanted to write the protagonist as noble and majestic, but when it came to the pirate character, it was like meeting a relative. The emperor is a majestic existence. Do you need to explain it one by one? If you want to be close to the people, don't forget Ying Zheng.

The protagonist, an emperor, has no character at all, so why explain so much to Kabu?

This Great Qin has already accepted Garp in the early stage, so it will definitely accept his two pirate grandsons in the later stage! They might even try their best to clear their name, no matter how many civilians they kill! Is your Da Qin fake? According to the law, Luffy will be imprisoned for at least a few years or even life imprisonment, and more likely, the death penalty! Ace directly sentenced him to death, there was no doubt about it! It depends on whether you, Da Qin, follow the law or not! But judging from the current relationship, even if you don't kneel down and lick the protagonist, you will still help the protagonist escape the crime!

According to the description, it is conceivable that the protagonist travels through a large place. If such a large place is shrouded in fog all year round, it is impossible for no one to know about it... And although the East China Sea is large, it is not large enough to accommodate such a big place... In short, it is a huge difference from the original work... It would be okay if it is set as an entrance to a different space...

I'm very confused, the protagonist is already an emperor, let alone the queen, why doesn't he even have a concubine? This kind of thing is no longer the protagonist's family matter, but a state matter that affects the country. Even if you don't take the initiative to mention it, the ministers should be able to talk about it and arrange it, so they all turn a blind eye? Also, if you can summon famous historical ministers and generals, why can't you summon famous concubines? Don't you want a woman from the pirate world to be the heroine? To be honest, if you are a pure pirate fan, then that's okay, but you are named after the Xian Qin Dynasty. Don't have a nondescript pirate heroine as a queen or concubine. It feels weird. There are many famous empresses in history. Let's arrange the position of the main palace first. Of course, that doesn't mean you can't write, just don't give it too much emphasis. Another aspect is the strength of famous ministers and generals. Xiang Yu can't beat Garp? He is said to be an overlord with unparalleled bravery in the feathers, and that's it? It's too crotch-stretching. . .