Primitive Tribe: Entering the Bridal Chamber with the Cat-Eared Girl at the Beginning

He is gluttonous as soon as he comes up. Isn't this bullying?

It's a beautiful landlady (rich woman) again. I can already imagine how you would pick her up. It would be a cliche plot if you vomit.

You can also call up all the information at once

What are you writing? A bunch of modern words and honorifics. Others will still feel guilty, sorry, and you need to continue to cross the three-meter ditch. Are you writing about a modern person who traveled through the past?

This book is well written, but I feel that the characters and settings of Luo Kui and Zi Teng are a bit overlapping (that is, one can see the shadow of the other in one person). I feel that this shaping is unsuccessful. For example, if Luo Kui's personality is more arrogant, Zi Teng can be a little more (the author thinks about it). Also, the words spoken by the two people feel like they were spoken by the same person (the author understands what I mean, the character setting must be clear) Not nitpicking, just making some suggestions

到第十章开始就不行了，强行喂毒，前面才刚女友绝症去世，后脚就直播来打自己脸，你要知道你写的主角人设背景是什么啊，牛头不对马嘴的

About "Starting with Super Three!" Written by Miao Mo Luhong! "Blow up the spiritual time house" 4, swallow energy bombs! Shock everyone! Chapter review.

一年前都见过这个小说了，又来骗人了，太监是肯定的了